:D Yay! You did the update thing! And while I'm not complaining in the slightest, may I point that there are just a couple of misspellings, and maybe, instead of using paragraph breaks to show a scene change, you should use something like *** or whatever. :3 They're easier to distinguish.
But yes! You updated! So cool! And from now on, I'm checking up on this more often. And it inspires me, the breaking of writer's block and slapping up the next part after far too long. :D Maybe I'll take your example.
I don know if you are gonna except ne more characters, but i think ill write ya one anyway! love your story...
Name: Jessica Allone
Code name: Fire Demon
Power: Trained killer in the art of knives and swords, she can fly, has unbeatable strength, and is able to produce fire from her fingers. This power leaves her skin burning hot to anyone else's touch, they get burned if they come in contact with her skin.
Description: Baggy black jeans, worn sort of like a boys', a tight green tank with mesh sleeves that go to her fore arm. Gloves like gambits. (the two fingers covered, but still covers the hand)Her make up is always dark and alluring, though not as goth as rouge's
Eyes: change colors according to her mood
Hair: Blue, with two blood red stripes in the front. It is as lons as her shoulder blades, and is up in a pony tail when she does her assignments.
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 110
Fears: uncontroable fire, bottomless, and sharks
Likes: hot boys, dark colors, the rain
Side: she is like a mercinary, she's for hire
History: Jessica's parents were drunks and abused her. She ran away when she was 12, and lived in the city of new oreleans, though she has never met remy or any of the theives guild. Her powers manifested when she was eight. She was playing tag with a popular mans doughter, ahen her hand made contact with the girl's wrist. It burned the girl, and Jessica has been shunned ever since. ever since. She is now 18 and a trained killer, she picked those skills up from a man named Alfred Stovic. He was killed.
Miscellainous stuff: her attitude is a little bad. She doesn't make friends easily, and doesn't talk about her feelings. She hates any one giving her a nick name.
Hey, you added my character in chapter 8 AND 9. Whoa, I didn't even know she got picked. Well, if you're reading this (and if you're ever gonna update again) here're the answers to your questions about Soleil: 1) when she starts working up a rage, that's when her powers spin out of control (she hasn't gotten complete control of them yet, etc.), 2) no, her cyclones won't harm her; she's gained enough control of them so that they won't harm her, kinda strange logic, but oh well, you can change this detail if you want, 3) I don't mind her being paired with anybody, it seems like you've begun to hint at a relationship between her and Tropic, that's fine, but don't make her fall for him TOO quickly...and 4) she's afraid of relationships b/c she's been burned by one too many in the past (hence her cold/emotionless personality)...Ehh, seems like this review came out longer than I expected. Oh well. All in all, this is a pretty good fic. The way you portrayed Soleil was exactly what I had in mind when I was filling out the character sheet. I hope you continue (that is you are or when you feel like it).
O.o Where the heck have /I/ been? *well, she does forget things... this one completely slipped my mind* Ouch. I feel so bad now.
Judging by the time between now and when you last updated, it's clear you may never update again, but I just wanna say, that you did okay with Kess. ) And I'm sorry I never reviewed before now, /except/ to submit him. I'm.. very much the scatter brain.
Power:He can make the enemy loose the ability to speak
Desctiption: Tall, tan, skinney and he has a large nose.
Hair:Short black and curly
Eyes:Hazel
Height:6'3
Weight:140
Fears: Death, not being able to see his family again.
Likes: Ice cream, fighting, and painting/drawing
Dislikes: Hiding from police, getting framed for murder, and snobs.
Side: Nutural
History: Joe was born in Florida. He was involved with gangs as a teen but it went terribly wrong. Allen Harek, a rival gang captian murdered a Police officer and framed it on Joe. To escape death sentence, or a life in the slammer he's constantly running from the police.
Missalinous Crap I can use: His dad is a police officer.(Oh the ironey!)He has a BAD temper. He's also desperatly trying to change his ways.
markers you know who this is 8/7/02 . chapter 1
Here's the Form!
Name:Rose Jenkins
Power: She has the power over plants. IE she can make a tree root turn into a sword, a leaf into a sheild ect...She can also bring back life to naturer that dies. It wield though her fingertips.
Desctiption: 5'4, muscular in the arm and a skinny waist and pale skin and freckles on her nose.
Hair: (Short, long, ect) brighy shiny red, cut to her shoulders, half pulled up in a purple ribbon.
Eyes: Wide oval shaped dark lavender eyes. WIth laong lashes.
Height: Already said that.
Weight:105
Fears: (What thet're afraid of) clowns, spiders, all insects, the dark, heights, large groups of ppl.
Dislikes: (Things they don't like) school, boys who think she's easy, grease, payphones (don't ask)
Side: (Good, Evil, Nutral...) Good
History: Her powes emerged at the age of nine during a school trip. She had been playing in the woods with her friends when she touched a tree that had been drooping down and it was soft and as soon as she touched it it jumped up straight and all the bark grew back. The one girl that saw her reported her to Bottomless who tried to abduct her but was saved by the good guys.
Missalinous Crap I can use: (Can't swim, side effects of Powers, Siblings...ect)She can't swim, every time she uses her powers she looses a pound. She has silver ball necklaces that go all the way to the base of her neck to the top. And silver bracelets on her wrists and ankles.
Sailor Bastet 7/18/02 . chapter 9
I love it! Please write more! We need another chapter!
Power: She can make things tighten. Ex. ropes, vines, cables, clothes, etc. as long as they are wrapped around something.
Desctiption: (What they look like outerwise) tight black shirt, has sleeves. the patten is like a tiger, only instead of stripes they're holes. Red shorts with slits half way up the sides. Sandals with the strap wrapping all the way up her calves. Scars all over her body. Knife in one of her shoes. Chain belt that she can use with her powers if she takes it off.
Hair: (Short, long, ect) A little past her shorts, thick and straight, Blonde with beads
Eyes: Sour lime
Height: 5'2
Weight: normal
Fears: (What they're afraid of) Lots of blood, bottomless
Likes: (Things they enjoy) teasing people she knows she can take, Flirting, stretching, candles, things to be tight
Dislikes: (Things they don't like) Being called Reeses Pieces, cooking, not being in control of at least what she can do.
Side: (Good, Evil, Nutral...) Evil, or Neutral to Evil
History: Parents were 14 (Kelly) and 16 (Danny) years old when they had her. She lived in a crummy motel all her life. Parents dropped out of school and were always working or out with friends trying to live their lives and not let her change them. She never went to school and doesn't know how to read, write, do math anything but street smarts. Joined a gang in her area at 14. Her power came that year while the gang was having a celebration for something. Things got wild and while she was making out with a guy she had a choke necklace on. The necklace kept getting tighter and she almost choked to death until someone cut it off. After the gang found out a couple months later when she 15 that she was a mutant the guys beat her up bad, but stopped when the cops busted in on them. She ran away knowing if she stayed they would kill her.
Missalinous Crap I can use: (Can't swim, side effects of Powers, Siblings...ect) The gang has connections and she is in danger of still getting killed if she is recognized by anyone. She is 17 now and has been going from place to place for 2 1/2 years. Her personality is to be seductive, likes to tease, has a motive for everything she does though she likes to act innocent, never yells and has a calm exterior even when her head is screwed up. No siblings. Sometimes if she has a bad nightmare she might choke herself accidentally (nightmares are of getting beaten up in the gang) Code Name - Choker
Hi, it's the long lost creater of Tony Jackson. My penname is ace. I just thought i'd post this here because i was bored. anyway, she has one older sister who was the apple of her parents eyes, so tony didn't like her much. Her fear is calmed if someone is climbing behind her, but if someone isn't there it takes her a longer time then normal to climb something. As i said her powers are like a bottle rocket. once her unseen energy has filled up an object then the oject just bursts forward. she can't charge a person, but she can charge their clothes. and i change what i said, she can't charge herself, but she can charge her clothes making her look like she is flying. i guess they would be more offinsive, but maybe both. um, probably on the good side, but it doesn't matter. 16 years old. ok, anything else you want to know just ask. Maybe i'll make an evil person to since i don't think you've said you've stopped taking characters yet. hope to hear from you soon.
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