|Reviews for Song of a Failure|
| danny 2/6/12 . chapter 1
o This was awesome I felt like it was made be the creaters of the game themselves.I'm sad it ended lolz
| Dark Knight Gafgar 9/5/10 . chapter 1
A good start. The only problem I can see with this is that I think Aurica (and Radolf, and a few other Church characters) were already supposed to be in Karulu Village when Lyner crashed. Let me check that real quick...
Yep. Playing the opening again shows Aurica standing in Karulu, seeing Lyner's airship go down, and immediately run off towards it.
Still, aside from that, good. Plus the minor change could always be a prelude to a bigger change later (maybe since Aurica is now in Nemo - on the other side of the Wings of Horus from Viola Forest - it takes her longer to get there and help Lyner?) or something.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how this develops.