Man, I wish you hadn't given up on this story. It even says at the beginning that you wouldn't give up on it but it's been two years since you updated so you obviously have. This is really good and I wish you would continue.

You damn Bi**h! What the hell man. Why you gotta spoil thing for everyone else. Okay so you don't like explicit sex scenes. Then don't FUC*ING read them! Rise of the Drackens has warings for every one of those scenes so you could have very well just skipped them.

Thanks so much for being so damn jeleous and judgmental. I hope you FUC*ING get bent. It's cits like you who make thing in the world far maore difficult than nessessary.

A very interesting story you've got here, sorry i'm jumping a bit late onto the bandwagon. Your writing style is very interesting. You write both Franziska and Lang well and the dynamic between Miles and Franziska is fantastic. The only flaw I can see is having to accept a lack of anything that has to do with a courtroom. It feels a bit like CSI with Franziska and Miles rather than a Ace Attorney court battle. One of the more jarring bits was when Franziska was riding with Lang to go put a very dangerous criminal in a maximum security prison. Why on earth is a prosecutor with no experience in such situations riding with the equivalent of a Black ops team?

Luckily this can be overlooked in lieu of your amazing story that's quite gripping. I can't wait to read more.

This is probably one of the best Ace Attorney stories I've ever read. Period. I love the way you portray all of the characters (save for Kay, she's really annoying). Lang, Miles, and Franzy are absolutely perfect, Lang especially 3 I feel sorry for the guy. I hope you continue this. I noticed you haven't updated in a while and I hope that you do soon. Thanks for making my day with this story!

Hey!

How long did I need to read all this chapters again? I guess it must have been more then 5 hours O.O Well, I know my English isn't very good at all, but I just wanted to thank you for such a beautiful story D You have to know... there aren't many storys 'bout Lang and the one I've already read weren't good at all... But your story is so awesome D I really like the way you discribe the situations and the charakters, too! It really tooked my breath when Miles, Franziska or Lang were in danger Drama, drama XD Well, I enjoyed reading and just be sure: You don't get so much reviews (wich really is a shame T.T), because they are all knocked out by your unbelievable, well written story! Just take it as a compliment I'm looking forward to read the next chapter soon, so please, PLEASE continue!

Happy Writing!

Sarawyn ( .de/u/Sarawyn)

This fic is absolutely brilliant. I love how well you get behind Lang and Franziska's characters and the story itself is rivoting. I think I've been sitting and reading for almost six hours straight, actually... eheh /

I can't wait for the next chapter! And hopefully you'll get some more reviews soon because this fic deserves WAYWAYWAYWAAAAY more than 25.

Happy writing! W

This chapter was... AWESOME!

Kay's returning as well as Ambassador Palaeno!

I knew that Cyan was the culprit but I thought that Caspian was too...

Also, well maybe you won't agree to this, but I think that something really should happen between Miles and Fran. I know, I know, it's not supposed to have any pairing in it but that's not my fault I can almost feel the kind of sexual tension caused by Fran's hate for him.

It's just...well this story could be a whole game you know, and Fran and Miles are exactly how they should be which is probably why I imagine them together! :)

I'm sorry to tell you that though. I hope you won't think that I'm some kind of pervert or anything but well I sense it like that! :)

See you! :)

okay.

so I know you don't know me, but I want to thank you for making my day awesome. I mean, ending the day with this story? Fantastic.

Why couldn't I find this story sooner ;_;. Everything about it is amazing, especially since the characters are, well, characterized so well :p. Franziska's still got that competitiveness, Edgey's calmed down, and Lang is... well, not the way he was in the games, but I like his new attitude. (Plus your reasoning as to why he's changed is sound)

Awesome work, keep it up

Ahh! This story is freaking awesome! Keep going!

Wow, I must admit. For a freshman, your writing style has developed rather greatly (same age as me ;D... it's a shame my writing style has yet to improve). The length and quality of the chapters is truly something to behold, though I'm sensing a bit of repetitiveness when it come to the detail.

I had never really been into the Miles Edgeworth spin-off (though I still greatly anticipate the upcoming sequel to said spin-off... as long as I can get my hands on anything Ace Attorney related, then I should be fine). However, this story made me realize that I should give it a second chance. This was a very intense chapter and I continue to greatly anticipate its progress.

PXLight

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Sorry, just had to say that. :) I can't wait to read more, there are so little fanfics about Franziska and Lang together.

Please write more soon!

At least, your titles are original not like mine!

I know I've already said it but this story is awesome! I just love the badass team Lang, Franny and Miles. And I hate Caspian. And I hope Fran will be able to save Lang!

And and and that's it! I hope I'll be able to read chapter 13 soon! :)

Oh, really? I was under the impression that you owned fire. Huh.

Don't apologize for long chapters. Long chapters are awesome.

So. Now for the review. Don't worry about Lang being OOC. Since we only really knew him for like 1 and a half cases, we don't really know what 'In character' would be. Lots of awkwardness in this chapter. Normally when awkward parts show up in a fic I can't even read it and I skip past it. With this I couldn't NOT read it. So I guess that's a good thing. It was epicly awkward. We need a word for that. Do we already have one? Awkepic? Epicward? Epawkward? Epawkic? I have no idea. This is why you do the name jumble thing.

Oh! And this chapter gave me inspiration for the WLOM prologue! So, thanks for that! It really has nothing to do with this chapter. But I got the idea while reading. So... I guess that's inspiration. Kind of.

Anyway, update soon!

Noooooooooooooooooooo! :(

Whyyyy! Please update next wednesday, you can't leave it like this!

;_;

Whyyyy? Why does Alba want Fran dead?

And I just loved the nightmares. Both. They were amazing.

Poor Lang too, I'm glad he's beginning to get away from Shih-na's paws. I just hate her.

And the coroner guy was just amazing. Man, he's giving such good advicem! Fran please just listen to him, because I'm sure that in your heart you're in love with Miles, that's why you're hating him so much.

I'm sorry if it's not like this that you're concepting this story, however her reaction is implying that she's in love with him for me.

Just asking, do you support this pairing?

See you! :)