It's awsome! But your not finished are you? Please I want to know what happens next!

Wow! This was such an entertaining and creative story. I especially liked how Aurelia is courageous and saves all of Neverland. Peter is also a likeable character despite his cockiness and the mermaids were more well-developed in this story as well. Also I felt like the fairies were better explained too. Well-written and enjoyable! Thanks. :)

Ha ha! Jax is such a completely random funny new character! Snowboarding on a pickle! lol

this was so good i made a copy of it. printed it out and put it in a binder. i love this story so much! if you could i would soo say get this published. this is around my 9th time reading this.(over a period of so many years of course). but thanks to this i think imma fail my speech due this week. i was sapposed to be working on that instead i got tied up in this story. damn it! its soo good! continue writing please. ur amazing. puts me in a good mood.

I think you did a great job on this story. Post the sequel up soon!

Very funny chapter. I love how Peter is so protective of her. It is so sweet. I love this story.

You know my friends name is Kristen and my name is Katerina. OMG!

awe that was so cute! i loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1

umm ... how should i say this nicely? oh, yah. RITE A DAMN SEQUEL! uh ... yup, thats 'bout it

opps... i hit enter to soon. anyway...THAT WAS EPIC! you should so wirte a sequel. agh. even though you probably are done with the story. please! well if you dont. i am really impressed and will always and forever be a fan of yours. your wirting technique is amazing. i just didnt want to stop reading this. :) ur amazing.

OMG!

i loved this i read this whenever i can. although i didnt find it my sister showed it to me. and i fell in love with it. i wanted it to go on longer because it was soo good. i have like a printed copyy of it. and i have it on about thee different thumbdrives. i recommended it to all of my friends to read. it truly is amazing and you should continue wirting. i give you six stars (you deserve an extra one)! :)

Thats so cute! I love your story! I hope theres a squel!

OMG! This is the best story EVER! -Runs in circles- I know this is a bit late to review but I just found it!

BRILLIANT STORY!

EP

Write a sequal please!