It's a cute story. Cloud's such a pervert in this one, but still adorable.

I like how Cloud's memory problems and stuff are mentioned in this one, even though they are not solved or anything. It is nice to read Tifa's thoughts about them.

Off to read the continuum now.

So funny! Good job!

This story was so much fun to read! A nice twist on the game where Cloud actually comes out and says all the things he should have in the first place! Although having him actually transform into a girl in the game may have made me stop playing XD it was pretty sweet for this story though. Favorited!

I love your dialogue! Great fast-paced flow and detail, and distinct characterization. Thank you for this!

That's it? OMG NO. You can't just do that! Not after all we've been through.

Haha, this was funny! Enjoyed reading this.(:

Fenikkusuken, thanx for suggesting I read this. I was going to give it the bye because I just don't dig HoneyBee stories, but this is just barely that. So much more and I had a good time with it. You've got Cloud, as I know him, spot on. And the relationship with Tifa, even early on in their chronology, is just as I imagine it. I am not a gamer, but the combined respect and lustiness he has for Tifa, and she for him, are just as I imagine it. There's shyness, too, but it's often over done. I've always thought that the emotional dead zone we see in ACC is more fear that he is a contagion and bone weariness at fighting the effects of the stigma and Mother's influence. I am SO glad you've joined the ff7 writer world and that kitsune 13 pointed me your way! thx mc

Wow. I really like this fic! Cloud is a bit OOC, but overall he's good!

Good job!

_Izky_

that was really good.

i like how it was expanded on fo sho.

:)

Ah! That was so good!

Oh my, that was excellent! I'm totally in love with your writing. Poor Cloud, but he took this whole...accident with class xD And the ending was just perfect :) Thanks for sharing!

you updated, and i almost missed it ? two chapters?

just finished reading it, loved it. what i probably loved the most was that you didn't portray Cloud as an emo-suicidal-mess during game time (not that he was an suicidal emo any other time excpet the first hour of advent children and the period before advent children when he got geostigma, which was really depressing to watch and then...i digress. in short me no likey emo-cloud

"I recognized you; that's not the same as knowing a person." thats so true. Cloud trusts Tifa no questions asked but that doesnt necessarily mean its mutual, especially after a five year gap.

To put it simply, I loved this and Tifa are the perfect couple. Cloud's personality at this point of the game is one that almost is not shown in the stories, though often wins Zack's personality the natural shyness of Cloud helps with the balance. I think Cloud was a little obsessed with broken necks broken, but oh well...the last part was hilarius. Absolutely a wonderful work

Simply perfect ending, I'm glad they are safe. I have to admit I cringed a bit with the giant snake. I'm so scared of them. I'm glad they are happily together and all the romantic touches. Amazing!

Good God that's funny. You've just made my day, good sir! Thank you kindly...