My God. I hail you.

*bows*

Amazing. Captivating. PERFECT.

After reading the first line I began singing in with a tune I cannot for the love of life remember the name of. If it has one. XP

*claps* This is one of the best poems I have -ever- seen.

Love,

Kae

Um... doesn't the disclaimer go with the poem? You're a brilliant poem writer, but... what's this for? There's a rule against chapters that don't have any story/poem in them. I don't know if this is breaking the rule or not, but I really hope not because I love your poem! I'm just a little confused... why in the world is the disclaimer both with the poem and here?

Wow. That's all I have to say- Wow. I write Remus poetry, too, and I love reading other people's poems on the subject. But this is just- wow. A gripping poem. This is absolutely brilliant. Please write more!

Wow. Just...wow. You have definit talent.

::starts to clap:: that was really good!

WOW that was great! Very descriptive! I loved it!

Keep up the great work!

*Padfoot4ever*

Fantastic poem! I love the style and rhythm. Great word choice. Your storytelling is excellent, and it even rhymes.

Hello, :)

I think this is a great Poem to tell what Remus went through. I really enjoyed reading this, Great job! ;P

-Lily Skylo

I really loved it, its so real you could feel like him for a moment, you are a great writer, your poetry is wonderfull, i saw some snape stuff ill go check it out, go girl! keep writing.:)

Now this emotion and poetry combined, beautiful. The feelings are very heartfelt and it gives you a sense of reality lingering in there.

wow! this was really good! you're a great writer! keep going! )

btw, i've read you're poem about snape too, it's really good,but this one is the best...

Excellent piece! Please continue.

Wondeful poem. You're gifted! If only we could all write poetry like this!

Most excellent!

You really have a gift for rhyming verse, you know that? Superb work!

Cheers, Meir Brin

Another master piece; I read Snape's poem before this.

You truly have a gift.