   Magalicious 4/16/08 . chapter 1this has potential, i'd love to see where it goes. up date soon. |
| Ryan Wolfe 8/22/05 . chapter 1 It's good so far ...PLEASE update soon ! |
| sarah 6/26/03 . chapter 1 great start!i can't wait to see what happens next!KEEP IT UP! |
| sodapop 8/24/02 . chapter 1 this is a real cool story idea! Keep up the good work. Can u please post more? I don't ever usually see any about Cherry and Marcia! Good idea. I hope i can see this updated soon! |
| MiriahoftheWind 8/18/02 . chapter 1 Pretty tuff so far. Keep writing. |
| Starstruck 3/6/02 . chapter 1 This is a cool start, really gets you interested in the story. Keep going :) |
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