I love this! I always imagined Anakin's first time to be with someone other than Padme, and this is a really good story. I love the character of Ryn, and I do feel bad that she loved Anakin in a way he wasn't able to return, but the story is quite lovely :) Nice job!

80 I did not see that coming! Well i guess i did really...still I was very surprized (for some reason).

wow..not usually my kind of story but this was good.