Well done. Sweet Da Jones

"It was us, and that is all that matters,"

This is so beautiful... Congratulations!

i loved it my first neville fic i believe i shall read those now

Thank You. This story made my day bc Neville/Hannah doesn't have anough good stories. I really loved it and i though it really was accurate of the characters :)

Generally, I don't like Neville/Hannah, but this was really good! :) I think the intensity works really well with the end of the war idea.

Really Sweet I could totally imagine this as Neville and Hannah it was so sweet! :) I liked it anyway it was a really nicely written piece of lemon lol like lemon meringue,lemons and fluff!anyway i loved it nice work! :)

I thought this was a very sweet story. I enjoy reading bumbling-yet-mature Neville, and your version of Hannah was sweet and a really good fit for Mr. Longbottom. :) Good work!

Aw... Bendleschnitz does fluff. :)

I randomly decided to veer from my Hermione-centric reading patterns and found this lovely bit of fluff. It was very sweet. I think you captured Neville and Hannah quite nicely.

(This is AuntLynnie from LJ, btw)

I thought that you wrote a great idea and thanks for writing.

I thought it was great.

This is really a very sweet rendition of a "first time" between Hannah and Neville. Neville transfiguring his shirt into a blanket is so in tune with his gentle character. Thanks for writing!

completely adorable :)