Now that was fabulously written. A brilliant use of narrative and very little dialogue which just added to your effect of angst perfectly. Wonderful.

Like it.

I liked it.

Definitely angsty, but in a good way.

Not OOC at all.

Nice job capturing the emotions in so few words.

Looking forward to more!

I'm pretty sure I'm the only one who would call this "lovely", but that's my determination.

I have been called the Queen of Angst though... :)

I didn't think it was all that angsty and I loved that fact by the way xD

It's realy nice, now I'll be waiting for the fluff/smut that comes after the angst *smiles sweetly*

Nice choice of song, but you already knew that...

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Loved it! Beautiful.

I have been waiting a while for your next story, and I was glad to see this come in. It is just fine. You have not lost your touch while being away for a while. Nice job.

I look forward to your next tidbit.

Thanks for posting this.

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First of all, the grin on my face when I saw your name in my inbox? Indescribable.

Angst? Grin is gone. But, hey, as I said - I'll take what I can get.

And I'd take this any day.

What I love the most is that while we still got the angst, we had the comfort of them still being together. Yes, that is me looking the world through the rose-tinted glasses. :(

Anyhoo, no OOC - just perfect as always, and I love you for it (and many other things).

Forever yours,

M. xx

"So they had been completely unprepared when the shots had started to rang in the dim-lit warehouse where the meeting was supposed to take place." - "shots had started to ring".