Oh poor subordinate.

You love to torture the poor people, don't you?

XD

I feel so bad for the maid! TT

#5 needs to start NOT being oblivious! :O

"Hey, I'm a father!"

I lol'ed at Ace. Again. :D

"SLUG!" What a great piece of opening dialogue. Another line that I really liked came right after. (His /other/ subordinate)

Seriously. Why does she only talk about not wanting to work? I mean, Nightmare has never, EVER done that. XDDD I love how you perfectly describe Nightmare's arrogance regarding his subordinate's inferiority.

"So why don't you just give Gray a break once in awhile and stop giving him so much work?" I think I was as surprised as Nightmare on this one-I had to read it twice. But it made me really respect her character.

Ooh, ouch. She gets the work. But I couldn't say I didn't see it coming...

I loved reading this chapter. The way you depicted Nightmare was scary accurate and tremendously funny. Can't wait for the next one!

The Ending! xDD I loved this cute little story about Peter. He seems to be the most hated character in the fandom, but I just feel so bad for him. The poor maid too, but at least she got a little time? I can't wait to finish reading the others.

- Lord

What else can I say? This is a pleasure to read and makes me wish we saw more of the king in the game, considering how important he is to Vivaldi. You know, for a Roleholder he is kind of a non-entity. Anyway, their interactions were adorable and Vivaldi was her usual regal self. The glimpse at her teenage self was well-done.

Aw that was adorable as always Raphy! Great job, keep it up!

Tee hee. That coupling is so cute. I loved the dance scene and was thrilled that you made the king such a likable character.

Once again, thank you for this update!

One again, love the loop arounds.

And I find it sweet that Five always remembers his friends.

Haha, good loop around when you mentioned Dum's fic; I appreciated that.

And I always knew Dee was the smarter one...

You always write the cutest things!

I laughed when she called Nightmare a slug. You also did well with Gray's personality; it was very likable.

Yes! Thank you for making a VivaldiXKing fic. We need more of these!

I like how you included the stuffed animal that showed up in the manga. It was also cute when she buried her head in the stuffed animal at the end.

Awwwwwww, so cute. Who knew Pierce had it in him?

You always have great stories, Seraphic Melody!

Cute!

This was so sad and sweet. I loved it, keep it up!