|Reviews for The Art of Romance|
| Ms.HP.Computer 4/11/12 . chapter 12
Oh poor subordinate.
You love to torture the poor people, don't you?
| Ms.HP.Computer 4/11/12 . chapter 10
I feel so bad for the maid! TT
#5 needs to start NOT being oblivious! :O
| Ms.HP.Computer 4/11/12 . chapter 1
"Hey, I'm a father!"
I lol'ed at Ace. Again. :D
| Space Whales 7/3/11 . chapter 12
"SLUG!" What a great piece of opening dialogue. Another line that I really liked came right after. (His /other/ subordinate)
Seriously. Why does she only talk about not wanting to work? I mean, Nightmare has never, EVER done that. XDDD I love how you perfectly describe Nightmare's arrogance regarding his subordinate's inferiority.
"So why don't you just give Gray a break once in awhile and stop giving him so much work?" I think I was as surprised as Nightmare on this one-I had to read it twice. But it made me really respect her character.
Ooh, ouch. She gets the work. But I couldn't say I didn't see it coming...
I loved reading this chapter. The way you depicted Nightmare was scary accurate and tremendously funny. Can't wait for the next one!
| LordFuzzyPants 6/19/11 . chapter 2
The Ending! xDD I loved this cute little story about Peter. He seems to be the most hated character in the fandom, but I just feel so bad for him. The poor maid too, but at least she got a little time? I can't wait to finish reading the others.
| EarthRiddle 12/30/10 . chapter 11
What else can I say? This is a pleasure to read and makes me wish we saw more of the king in the game, considering how important he is to Vivaldi. You know, for a Roleholder he is kind of a non-entity. Anyway, their interactions were adorable and Vivaldi was her usual regal self. The glimpse at her teenage self was well-done.
| Pasty face 12/29/10 . chapter 11
Aw that was adorable as always Raphy! Great job, keep it up!
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 11
Tee hee. That coupling is so cute. I loved the dance scene and was thrilled that you made the king such a likable character.
Once again, thank you for this update!
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 10
One again, love the loop arounds.
And I find it sweet that Five always remembers his friends.
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 9
Haha, good loop around when you mentioned Dum's fic; I appreciated that.
And I always knew Dee was the smarter one...
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 8
You always write the cutest things!
I laughed when she called Nightmare a slug. You also did well with Gray's personality; it was very likable.
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 7
Yes! Thank you for making a VivaldiXKing fic. We need more of these!
I like how you included the stuffed animal that showed up in the manga. It was also cute when she buried her head in the stuffed animal at the end.
| Space Whales 12/29/10 . chapter 6
Awwwwwww, so cute. Who knew Pierce had it in him?
You always have great stories, Seraphic Melody!
| NinjaSheik 12/7/10 . chapter 10
| pasty face 12/6/10 . chapter 10
This was so sad and sweet. I loved it, keep it up!