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Reviews for: Serpent Under the Flower
Reiyla 8/3/11 . chapter 2
This is my first time vein able to catch you in your early chapters. I love your work and look forward to following this story. I'm already excited. I feel that you beat portray the ff characters personalities and I forget most of the time that they are not originally yours. I can't wait for your next installment!
Sanz0girl 6/30/11 . chapter 2
O_O This is so interesting!
KHfujoshigirl98 6/27/11 . chapter 2
You've updated! I am so happy right now. I thought you had forgotten about this story, but then again, you have so many stories you're writing right now so it's understandable. But anyway, I'm glad you updated.

P.S. I liked how you made it so Angeal didn't really like Sephiroth at first.
The Ninja And The Writer 6/24/11 . chapter 2
*Waggles Finger* You better not take so long next time!

Come on! I have waited for this? (Yes, Yes I have... *Head drops in shame*)

We need to get on to the juicy part of the story... (Where they MEET)

Please? PLEASE?

The Ninja Vendetta
Purple Pallbearer 6/24/11 . chapter 2
Well I can only hope that this will be one of your more fun fic instead of your more depressing ones. How you can write both and write them well is beyond me. I guess we all have are talents.
0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 6/24/11 . chapter 2
Aw, you shoulda updated it! xDx I really like how it's developing. :3
0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 6/24/11 . chapter 1
I definitely like this. :3 the style is really nice. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Ardwynna Morrigu 6/23/11 . chapter 2
Those two look like a match made in Frustration Heaven. I hope Gen can teach Seph a thing or two about really living before the crap hits the fan.
KiraiAnca 6/23/11 . chapter 2
I'm really excited to see how it'll work out. This is the first time I'll be following a really long fic (I assume? from the premise?) from the very beginning.

One thing, though:

"with the words of an epic suck as Loveless" - freudian slip?
ello 5/17/11 . chapter 1
heyy i like it so far :) it was pretty good...cant wait to see what happens next :) please continue.
StarKid Shades 10/5/10 . chapter 1
I like it so far. Is this Genesis-centric?

By the way, when you labeled it Tragedy/Romace, am I to assume this will be a very sad ending? I.E: One of the five lovers die, break up or something?

I love these fivesome by the way. x3
firedraygon 8/28/10 . chapter 1
I love Genesis' characterization here! Haha, and how Angeal tries not to laugh at Gen while spying is a lovely scene. Please write more soon!

fd97
Kagome-reincarnation 8/27/10 . chapter 1
I'm looking forward to seeing how this will play out. The starting point is interesting, and the ultimate ending is what's got me curious. How is this going to work? How long will it take? Mostly, I'm impressed, but I'm definitely going to keep up with this, though I can't promise frequent reviews.

On another note, there was only one error that I noted - probably because I'm sleep-deprived and you're just that awesome.

"Genesis couldn't exactly explain why they already had their shots, but Hollander took care of them since they were kids and it all lead to the same place."

The 'lead' here should be 'led'.

Keep up the great work!
scared of darkness 8/27/10 . chapter 1
So far so good. great beginning. Ready for more!
KHfujoshigirl98 8/27/10 . chapter 1
Yay! Another fivesome! Do you know long this is going to be, maybe? I always have to prepare my brain to read and comprehend a really long fanfiction.
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