alas poor snively, Racism mixed with deep burning hatred without any way to get an output can lead to many a dangerous thing indeed.

I'm going to have to say, this is my favorite part of the four that make up this story arc.

I read it a while ago on your site and relished in the idea that this was genuinely a tragedy. I enjoyed your own ideas of what the characters act like, adding a hefty degree of originality to the piece and some dimension to otherwise flat characters (thanks a lot, Archie).

Excellent read.

Why can't they all just get along?

I don't know why this took me so long to finish. Maybe it was the hysterics that came from watching the scrolling bar shrink to a hyphen every time I opened the story on your site. Whatever. I like it. You have a good thing going with the Antione/Snively/Bunnie/Geoffry relationship. My favorite scenes include the ones with all of them in a room together, bein all uncooperative and sheit. And the party scene was made entirely out of yucks.

damn now that was intense

but a wonderful story with is now nearing its "action" damn what will happen

dare I say it poor Snively

and Bunny reacted perfect as she through Antoine out cold hehe

maybe there is hope jet

Hmm so Snively is still not willing to be among these people well then he need not to wonder about some threadment.

again good Chapter, the swearing was a little off and Tails seemed a little to young even for after Season 2

but overall good Chapter now i wonder how that with Bunny and Snively will go out and his urge for the Rings that seems not healthy.

Basic Rule: I am from Germany so dent expect english.

wow again very good like the other Storys in this Series

a little negativ fact is still the swearing and all but i guess it fits

now Snively he seems a little OoC now, not that i no it in every Detail, but why is he still such an "Asshole" to the others, its no wonder he gets nothing "good" in return if he not even trys

its also interresting to se the thing with Bunny and Snively going on atleast from Snivelys Lust part or something.

Hi Allison! I'm not sure how this whole review thing works, but I'll just assume it means offering an honest opinion and so I'll give it a whirl! I'm a college creative writing/visual arts major who grew up with Sonic SatAM and who has always considered it one of the most emotionally and intellectually sophisticated cartoons ever produced-right up there with Disney in its glory days and Dreamworks now. When, to my great frustration (understatement), they cancelled SatAM, I tried to cope by reading that Archie comic, but, ehh, well, as we all know, it's kind of crumbled into nothingness, too. So I got into fanfiction whenver my mind drifted to all things Sonic. When I finally ran across your stuff, I was truly impressed! I know you say fanfic's your favorite genre, but you really ought to write on an even more varied scope. If you're pre-college, I hope you decide to major in creative writing too.

So what do I particularly like about your fanfics? I have actually discovered someome who loves the character "Snively"! Yay! He's my absolute favorite, too. I think your work is so successful because you pick up on the fact that his character has the most potential for growth and development, for breaking beyond that dangerously one-dimensional realm that makes other characters lack interest or credibility. He really can't be pinned as merely a villain or a "good guy;" rather, he's a mixture, and you picked up on his complex psychology mnarvelously! It's also a great technique for a unique narrative viewpoint. We're used to hearing the protagonist's side of the story, but now we have to digest the world from Snively's distorted, jaded viewpoint! Awesome, man! And finally, someone noticed those amazing, disturbing, beautiful eyes of his! I would always read fanfics featuring him in the past and be grititng my teeth thinking, how can these authors neglect his eyes? Perfect visual representations of his personality? You also captured other characters's traits, eg. those of Geoffrey (yes, I also hate him), beautifully. I sure hope you get that skunk's hindside walloped in the next part of this fanfic. What a jerk! :) Of course, I get the notion you don't like Good King Max too much, nor Princess Sally. I dunno if that's deliberate, but maybe they ought to get a little more smpathetic in the reader's eyes as they begin to accept Snively (which I really hope they do :) )

Okay, now for "constructive criticism." Wahoo! Um, this is just my personal reaction, so it may or may not matter, but I'm not too keen on the overtly sexual scenes-at least the more protracted ones-because frankly I don't see that they add much emotionally or mentally to the impact of your story-they just kind of get in the way of my reading of the plot, interrupt it, y'know? Anyone can write a sex scene and the rest of your stuff is so uniquely excellent that I really don't think you need so much kinky stuff. I mean, I know sometimes it's necessary for the plot, as in Snively's attraction to Bunnie (by the way, a very peculiar, but interesting, twist), but otherwise, nah! Also the stronger of your curse words-eg. the big bad "F word"-just kind of startle me more than add anything vital to my experience of the story-so I guess you could say I'm more like Tails than ol'Snively in that aspect! :) Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to censor you or anything, it's just my honest reaction.

So anyway, that ended up long! Sorry! :) You're a great writer, Allison! I'm eager to read your next "Fissure" installment! I love Snively and SatAM, so if you ever feel like chatting about those subjects, email me!

-Carol

Yes, a new chaper from Ali. Your fanfics are like crack. Sheeit, I'd sell babies for more!

So, yes, I quite liked this. Am very much looking forward to part two.

About time you got this out, Ali! Very good as usual, and you've defintely got the 'jealous bastard of a boyfriend' thing down with Antoine . . . and it seems with this last development, Bunnie doesn't want the jerk anymore. Really, who would? I can't wait for the next part!

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME! KEEP UP THE GOOD

WORK! YOU ROCK!

That was wonderful! That was even better than the last chapter! Poor Sniv... will he ever find true happiness? (sniffle!)

Truly excellent. I've been looking forward to this, and, as usual, my expectations have been completely blown away. Your writing style keeps the reader constantly involved, and makes it easy to care about the characters. This is a great series!

Awesome! I love your stories! Keep up the good work, please!