 Shelbey 9/4/10 . chapter 1That was probably the greatest story I have read in a very long time. It was insightful, it was heart wrenching, and honestly I could see it happening in the canon as something so real. The way you wrote the tainted Mytho was so true to the character that I was surprised, because so many people get him wrong.
I love your characterization of Kraehe and I was sad about the ducks. I didn't know what he had done, but when you revealed it, I cried. Very good job. |