 Soi Fon and Yoruichi r awesome 5/23/11 . chapter 10is yoruichi coming back?
when will u update next? |
 Soi Fon and Yoruichi r awesome 5/23/11 . chapter 5awesome! |
 odagiriryu 3/19/11 . chapter 10cool story!
hope you'll continue updating it again :D |
 TheBeginingsEnd 3/13/11 . chapter 10Cool story,the iner world was creative |
 HumbleDoll 1/22/11 . chapter 10 Wow... Pretty neat how Benihime reacted to her. Great stuff! Update soon! |
 BoomCat 1/21/11 . chapter 10 Yes! Finally finished! Took me forever to read it all in half a day bit I got distracted... Alot, lol. Great work though. Update soon! |
 Random 1/7/11 . chapter 1 Oooooooooooooooh! I love the beginning, great work, can't wait to stop rambling and begin reading again! Talking about me lol |
 NotAStalker 1/4/11 . chapter 10 I love this a bunch! I have absolutely no complaints! Keep up the great work, update soon. Please. Lol I sounded demanding. |
 Shaded.Goggles 10/31/10 . chapter 10I've noticed you had change this chapter in various ways and I'll say I like it better. One because the other one went a little fast and two, it got way more interesting too. Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 Suspicious Pickles 10/25/10 . chapter 9Excellent writing style with really good visual too. The only complaint I have is to please stop with the Japanese words. When there is an excessive amount of Japanese words the reader must usually stop for a moment to remember the meaning of the word, interrupting the flow of the story. |
 Shaded.Goggles 9/21/10 . chapter 6I love this fanfiction! Please update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next! |