Reviews for Persistence
dress without sleeves 11/5/12 . chapter 1
The word "cute" doesn't begin to describe this. Kind of perfect, though? Because of course, "swim to me, Rose," is exactly the way that Rose lives her life. She KNOWS her mother is going to back away, but damnit if she's not going to jump in anyway and swim until she CATCHES HER, DAMNIT.

Part of me thinks that every time Rose jumped, she jumped a little further, knowing that her mother was going to move back but hoping she could catch her by surprise.
Sourdoughtoast 9/6/12 . chapter 1
"M'lulling you into a false sense of security." HHAHAHA I love that. I kinda like not-as-awkward-more-sexy doctor as well. (Just so you know, I'm waggling my eyebrows at you).
tomboy 26 7/29/12 . chapter 1
All the awards for writing something as sweet and sexy as this. I love Rose and TenToo so much.
Angela Jewell 11/17/11 . chapter 1
I sooo love these stories: light, sweet, smart, and full of heart. :)
MissFictionPrincess 7/14/11 . chapter 1
Loveeee! That was adorable! :)

-Hailey
Baakthatsthenoiseachickenmakes 7/6/11 . chapter 1
I like it :P I like it a lot.

-Baak
Rose of Zakarisz 1/10/11 . chapter 1
"Tenacity lessons." hahaha, brilliant!
bite-me-im-irish 11/2/10 . chapter 1
Hehe... made me giggle wish, not for the first time, that I was Rose...x
FifthDayOfMay 9/11/10 . chapter 1
XD Time Lords it seems, are horrible perverts. Or at least this one. This was adorable and also rather hilarious. I absolutely love it.
Miss Snazzy 9/2/10 . chapter 1
Great story. I really liked how playful this was and the Doctor's take on how Rose learned to swim. I remember how I learned to swim. One of my floaties had a hole in it, so my dad decided to just toss me in there with one. After swimming around in terrified circles with only my floatied arm keeping me above water, I learned.
Laura x Tennant 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful x
Anonymous 8/28/10 . chapter 1
Eeek :D
Chiella 8/28/10 . chapter 1
This was so cute. Jackie giving Rose lessons in tenacity? Perfect. I especially liked the line where Rose teases him for being a two year old- such a fun contrast to the usual 900 years old alien lines.
Peregrinate 8/27/10 . chapter 1
Awww. :)
FindingStarlight 8/27/10 . chapter 1
This was so sweet, I loved it.