Good. Allways like good endings. Thanks.

Well done you made a seemingly impossible situation , and gave it a happy ending , well done )

That was sooooooo better then the original. I applaud you!

wow dude this is good, are you continuing?

Wow, very nice story! How you wrote Rael's feelings is very touching. And the scene where Shep

ard talked to Rael, very well written, even if slightly too short IMO, but not that short one can't feel the tension.

Only 2 quibbles: One, there are several misspellings. Two, Dr. Chakwas' description of the geth is slightly inaccurate; the *whole* geth faction actually fought the quarians when they became sentient (and the quarians wished to exterminate them). Only after the geth drove the quarians from Rannoch did they split into two factions: the heretics that supported the reapers and fought with the galaxy, and the main faction which wanted to achieve their own ascendancy.

That said, you still have a very good story. I commend you :)

I really like this story, but I think you need to go back aand do some serious struture repairs and spelling revisions. Other then that, I do like stories where Rael managed to live, I wish he wasn't such a throwway character. Anyways, keep up the good work!