 Malvolia 8/28/10 . chapter 1I like this, and how the very Sheldon-esque complaining (that seems normal) and the "strange twisting sensation in his stomach" are both revealed at the end as over-sensitivity due to the events of the preceding night. There are some very Sheldon bits:
"if he'd *wanted* to chew the juice, he would've just eaten an orange and skipped the cup part of this exercise"
"this is surely the worst day of his life (perhaps not literally, but it certainly is fast climbing the charts)"
And I really like it when fics don't telegraph their intent and sort of surprise you at the end, and yours did this. Well done. |