this was so very sweet and romantic!

i loved how you made it from Fiyero's perspective, and i love how you did his reaction to the spell! keep on writing!

Aw, great job, Mindaba. :D Sorry it took me so long to review, I'm not sure why it did. /

"The Witch of the West was dead. That didn't mean Elphaba was." - I feel like this line perfectly captured the end of the musical.. you did an awesome job. Really. :D

I can't believe it's over, though! :(

Jenda

(Don't worry, I'm an even WORSE updater.)

i cannot belive it is over... i will miss this story. hopefully it gives you more time to update your q and a though. you had me in tears here. great ending.

Wow, I can't believe the trilogy is over! Another great chapter and end to the story! Even though we had to wait like six months... Loved it! :)

Aww :) kinda sad but still nice

I have heared you have a diesese of sorts. Writers block sucks. I hate it. I just hope you know there is a reason why we read your stuff. It's because it's freakin awesome! I hope this helps you recover of gives you motivation of sorts. Love ya! (not in the creepy way.)

Nothin to comment on really! ur doin a great great job! Just waitin 4 the last chapter!

awwwwwww! this is so great, i love it! Are you going to continue to update? Please do, I need to know what happens! Fiyeraba is the reason for my existence! :)

awwww sooo cutee, i luv it

loved it

Oh Bock...stupid munchkin...3

A lovely retelling of the story and I'm so pleased you've skipped over the Dorothy bits. That child infuriates me so much!

You've really got into all the characters' heads; Fiyero's adorable personality, Boq's bitterness, dammit, I even felt sorry for GLINDA, and normally I want to b*tch-slap her!

This chapter was... Amazing. I really love it. The wait was well worth it.

Hooray, an update!

Awesome chapter, Mindy!

I'm not going to lie, Mindaba- this is probably the best chapter yet. I assume it's because DTL kinda forced you to get into little Fifi's head, right? Haha :)

I really like how you made Fiyero not completely despise Dorothy. I mean, I know YOU do, so that must've been difficult, haha.

Poor Glinda... of course I'd manage to fit that into this review somewhere...

Fantasticifed job!

Jenda

PS: Don't feel bad, I'm neglecting my stories even more than you are...