Oh my, Hennng is quite a terrifying character 0.0"

I really enjoy how you incorporate the fight scenes here. Gohan isn't invincible, or fast enough to blitz past every foe.

Here you gave him limitations not only in speed, but stamina as well, and I love it. Gives the story more of a serious feel D

I love the way you explained the Saiyan biology, and how it helps support/weaken a Saiyan, very impressive D

Larkas was right, Bojack is excellent for muscle. I almost forgot how weaker Gohan is without his ssj2 stage against that guy 0.0"

Very good chapter. I like the different points you brought up so far. Such as Gohan's inability to transform because of the planet. But I wonder what they're doing to make this happen... curious.

Glad little Eesei is fine, I hope she doesn't die, she's the cute one ;3;

And Frieza, acting... Frieza, badass :3

I generally leave in depth reviews that making my fingers bleed in their creations, but I'm emotionally exhausted from the end of this god given miracle, weeping like a child for its mother; so I'll sum it up into one word, my mind far to numb to search for something far more majestic then it:

Epic.

There is nothing more to say then that.

I know that you're already done with this story, but in Dragonball Z Friezas race has been suggested to be called, "Arcosian".

Well i would have to say you wasted 3 days of my life reading this. There was no ending. Frezai and garlic should not go back to hell for helping. The doctor and that one guy along with his family are strandes. The plaent is ruined because of the civil war and their transformation. The story was good until the final 3 chapters.

All these years later, and it's amazing.

Masterpiece.

...absolutely amazing.

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OH WOW WOW WOW WOW!

...whoah!

FABULOUS!

Oh!