Splendid!

Oh, good times!

Oh, my goodness, this is still fantastic!

Ah, just as rich and captivating as I remember it being!

O.O

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Oh my god.

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Holy Christ. You are the Best author ever!

You didn't once call him a 'demi saiyan'

And OH MY GOD! You are God's gift to this world!

You have such unique and amazing talent, I only wish I could have hounded you as you wrote it!

Your characters astounded me;

Henning- wanted to rip his face out for what he did to Gohan...

Bojack; you made me LIKE him!

(Bows to you)

This will stay in my favorites forever, you are the best most talented creative inspiringly great writer I've read for years!

:)

And it did keep me on my toes.

;P

I quite like the flow of this story, though there are far and few errors (words forgotten...)

Plot related question : why didn't the healing restore Gohan's tail ?

Hey Chelsee,

Just finished reading this for what is probably the fifth time. I have to say, I never get tired of this! :) It's just one of those fics that, throughout the years, is one I can come back to time and time again. I always come away from it with that satiated feeling of having read something good. I come away with it with something else to think about.

I think that this time around, the bit that was of particular interest was the description of the Tach-jin's abilities and the Saiyans' physiology regarding the tails. I thought it was a really good explanation to the way Saiyans react to having it touched.

I always have and still do think that you did an amazing job on this. As I mature I see things that I'd change (and there are occasional typoes that make the grammar/spelling nazi in me horrified) but otherwise, I still enjoy it as much today as I did when I first read it (which I believe was in 2002 or 2003.)

In any case, I'll end this and just thank you for writing it. I don't know if you ever even check this email anymore, but I thought I'd write this nevertheless.

Thanks,

Seneschal

It took some time reading but i really enjoyed your story, except the parts where Gohan was all angsty and upset that he killed some freak alien who was trying to kill him, really dont understand how his mind works and i dont agree with that killing is wrong and evil. There are just to many exceptions to it.

But overall it was a great story, although Gohan almost lost all the major battles i still enjoyed. I was overly grateful that there was no Romance, not that i expected it really because it would be to random and would kill the story.

Anyway lol this review is 6 years after you finished the story but i still thought you might like it.

- Xadro

Hmmppf 'Tousan' is a fucking coward himself, staying away willingly while he has a family to support, he could easily be wished back, but no he decided to stay away from his friends and family, for what you ask? Well to train off course so he can train and fight without his family (wife) interfering. Damn coward. I really dont know why all authors have to write all angsty because his father died because of him, really it was Goku's decision to stay away, he should be angry at Goku not sad.

- xadro

Wow holy crap that was one awesome story! I loved it! It was so full of suspense that I wanted to yell at it to hurry up sometimes XD And the character developement was done so well. They seemed so real. The idea was so original, never read anything like it. I also really like how you restricted gohan's super saiyan powers. It made for all the more obstacles and it is rather ridiculus even in the anime and with all that super saiyan stuff (super siayan 3 was just random and made goku look dumb imo) lol, Its not the kind of fic I read, usually into either romance or humour, but I'm glad I found this. Although gohan's depressing moods got a bit wearing after a while, its more realistic and really altered the mood I spose. and made the ending that much sweeter xD.

this story is honestly one of the best, most well thought out fanfictions i've ever read! i just couldnt stop reading! its 2 in the morninng and i think i started reading around 2 in the afternoon! again great job! keep up the imagination and may the fanfiction muses whack you upside the head once more! _

This was, Oh my Gosh this is the best Dragonball Z story I have ever read wow fantastic and I am so glad I found it.

Wow. :D

Though a little too "weak" - I DO like SSJ in action. :D

But this fic is cool. :D

Nice. :D

too good...the fic just amased me and made me think deeply about gohans often conflicting thoughts and emotions and it all made perfect sense. in short I LOVED YOUR FIC...it was just too good