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| Reviews for Prompted |
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  Mostar 3/10/13 . chapter 1 I guess to skipper, it was a crappuccino. Lol are you going to make more of these prompts? |
| Mostar 2/16/13 . chapter 10 Are you going to continue? PLEASE say you're going to continue! |
 WaffleNommer 10/19/12 . chapter 4"Bloody hell we broke my bed!" HAHA THAT'S FREAKING HILARIOUS! I'm putting this in favourites! |
| Tsuru-san 8/12/12 . chapter 10 These drabbles are really well-written. Great job! Also, I didn't ship Rico/Kowalski much before reading these, but now I can totally see them together. XD |
| SweeterThanChocolate 6/23/12 . chapter 10 why do i find this so awesome? (ohyeahcozitis) |
| west189 6/3/12 . chapter 10 You updated! I was beginning to lose faith! I now know to believe, no matter what! You are one of the few authors exclusive to Skivate and Kico. Plus, English is your first language (I'm guessing here), and Indonesian is not. Alright! On to typos of this chapter! I'll just list the prompt and the error in grammar after it. Butterfly: There should be a comma after 'Sadly' -face. Sadly, he Doodle: There should be a semicolon after 'report' and before 'it.'- report;it Hot: There should not be a 'to' between 'turned' and 'burning.'- water turned burning hot Also, the way you phrased the last sentence doesn't work. You can't use 'out' as an adverb and a preposition. I suggest changing the sentence to 'He never heard Rico as he walked out giggling.' Fag: The word 'to' is not an adverb. It's used as a preposition here. I suggest adding an infinitive after in order to make it an adverb. This will allow you to maintain the rest of the sentence. In the second sentence there should be a comma after week- week, so all week Also, I think you meant 'proud' instead of 'round.' Okay, there are many more errors, but I'm not your beta reader, and I'm too tired to type anymore. If you're curious about what the rest are, PM me. But still, I'm a big fan of this fanfic! West189 |
| TheEnvyIsTheBestSin 5/3/12 . chapter 1 I love all your drabble. BUT I've a little problem. You don’t put a description about how the human penguins looks like. But, still awesome. |
| Layra 4/11/12 . chapter 10 i love it this chapter and pretty please make more chapter.i want to know what happen next with skipper and private and kowalski and rico too. |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 10 Update! |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 9 The last one just made me smile :) |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 8 Stagger makes me wonder... |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 7 Red was my favourite... i love Private and how's he like the moral compass of the group |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 6 I abosolutely love the friendship in objection! |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 5 Im glad that you havent made one so bad that i stopped reading :) |
| hotpink jellybean 4/9/12 . chapter 4 Omg! The bed one was perfect! Best drabble I've read! |
