litheshadow - The story is labelled as "Firbankian-Beardsleyesque". My use of language is a deliberate homage to Beardsley's 'Under the Hill' (1890s mock-Rococo) and Firbank's 'Concerning the Eccentricities of Cardinal Pirelli'. I had thought of writing more, but I thought it best to leave it unsaid: it would be a distinctly unsavoury sort of "romance", methinks!

Very nice indeed but somewhat... strained? The conversation seems like they are being very deliberately polite- and they are showing to each other that they are being very deliberately polite, which does get tedious after a while for the reader. But, apart from that, fabulous description- though too much dialogue. I shan't expect for the continuation of this, since the flare for a romance involving the two has long gone, I can see- but, all the same, nice start- I'd steal it from you and continue it if I were more passionate than I am.
Good day,
the Critic you all LOVE to HATE,
litheshadow.
To the GRAVE.

P.S. lovely word choice- but also very strenuous.

A lovely, well-written piece about a movie I adore. I'd love to see more of this, too.

the beginning was intriguing and well written... you shouldn't have given up...

Very good and I hope you will finish it.

I really like the fanfic and hope you will finish it.

Hi,

Nice story, pity you haven't finished it. Just one remark - i was pretty sure that Ignacius Loiola (or whatever his name is spelled) founded Holy Inquisition along with Jesuit order.

Hey Doc M!

Gee, I LOVE Brotherhood of the Wolf and so I LOVE your fanfic! It's quite cool! Go on with writing Brotherhood of the Wolf-fanfics and by the way..., also read my Brotherhood of the Wolf-fanfic and review it, that would be really nice because it's my first fanfic ever...! *LoL* It's called "The History od Gévaudan Part one", I hope you like it!

Greetings,

~MadeMoiselle de France~

I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews for this story. It's very well written. I like all the little details you've thrown in - the paintings of the Saints in Sylvia's office, the ivory snuff box, etc. It makes the whole piece more... I don't know... believable, I guess, is the word. It certainly adds depth to the characters and the setting.
"Throw a Jesuit from the dome of St. Peters and he'll land on his feet." I like that. It's probably true, too. ^_~
I would love to see this story develop into something. It's off to an amazing start.