I love their angry banter, it's so great! I could just imagine him sliding down in his chair and rolling his head back 'just kill me now' in a whiny voice. great chapter :)

Yay Barry's gone!

I love the way you write these characters - Sands is especially intriguing and I love that Charlie is someone that can go toe-to-toe with him

I love the way you write Sands - this story is very good!

Oh, she's cool :) very interesting!

Dude, you've inspired me to get off my lazy bum and finally put in writing my OUATIM story.

For years, the CIA tried to make the perfect soldier.
What if they succeeded?

Awwwww, that was so sweet, this romance works so well even though in theory you wouldn't think it would. Anyway even though I keep saying how much I love this story I'm just gonna say it one more time! And it's really good how you've worked the suspense elements in, especially towards the end. I did actually feel a chill through me reading the bit at the end. Something that would be helpful is maybe a timeline or something of how long Charlie and Sands have known each other and when different events happened. Probably me being unperceptive and not having worked it out while reading it. Thanks again )

Thank you so much for taking the time to write one of the best stories I've seen on here in a LONG time ) I loved how you made use of the story title in this chapter. yet again more apologies for not reviewing when you posted. Before this I would never have been able to imagine Sands in this sort of situation but Charlie is perfect for him and I couldn't see them any other way. Thanks again for the amazing read xx

I heard the song "Breakfast at Tiffanys" and was like "Rigging the Game" and everybody looked at me like I'm a freak! Love it!

I absolutely adore this story! Incredibly well written and I love how you've kept up Sands' character throughout regardless of the fact that it's a romance. I'm so excited for the sequel! Awesome job!

This has been a fantastic story! And you managed to leave us with a cliffie! I'm so glad you are doing a sequel. This is my favorite Sands story. Keep up the good writing!

Omh! Barry is a perv& a stalker! Good luck Charlie!

Omg!its so dramatic... & i am so happy theres going 2 be a sequel!

AHHHHH! Well we knew he was alive. He really became psycho. Maybe it's a father/son thing.

I cannot wait for the sequel. Pretty please let there be hope for them! I need them to be together.

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So I cried at the end of this chapter. I can't believe that there is no hope for them! There has to be! Please? Heading over to read the epilogue now. Can't wait for the sequel!

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