KAWAII! :D :D :D

Oh! Sesshoumaru worrying over Rin is just so sweet. I loved how you described his anxiety with his moving and changing seats while he complained/excused that he's just not comfortable. Especially how he seems quite controlled at the beginning, and then start mentally cussing at the long wait ("Inuyasha would probably find this whole situation fucking hilarious"). Best of all, he still seemed as prideful as ever.

So nice. I love this story. 'm adding it to my faves. Definitely.:D

Ahahahahahah!! Ah, Sesshoumaru. He's so transparent. xD

Very nice. I loved Sesshoumaru's dry, put-off tone. Wonderfully in-character. Great description has he tries to pass off his growing concern as physical discomfort resulting from the tree he's sitting on.

cute

*grins* Oh, that's great. Love the way you did it and Rin's reason for being late xD

Ah!
CUTE!!

I had to smile all the way through this--the way his thoughts kept circling back; the way his physical discomfort was so much clearer than his mind; the way he finally cracked, just the tiniest of cracks, with Inuyasha's imagined view of the situation (so uncharacteristically self-conscious) and the curse word forced out of him, squeezed out by "that tightening in his stomach".

The "odd feeling" rising into his chest, and his transparent attempt to re-cast it as outrage, was bizarrely charming--charming even in the face of that poor Jaken's convenience.

Lovely!

This was really good. It was funny but serious at the same time, and I liked the style you wrote it in. Nice job.

I loved this and the way you characterized Sesshoumaru. It was perfect, and so funny, in a kind of sad, serious way. I really enjoyed this.

Kawaiiness!

Aw...! That was adorable. Sesshoumaru worrying, all the while being far too emotionally constipated to realize he's worrying. Doesn't get more classic than that!

Keep Writing!

~May

::snort:: very cute and anal sess. lovely work.

AW, that was WONDERFUL! Sesshoumaru's characterisation was priceless. I also liked how you ended it. Well done!

This is great. Good roll, capturing of tension, and I love the humor of it all :)