That was so adorable! I enjoyed the tension at the beginning and your attention to details. On the whole a very enjoyable read. Keep it up!

aww fflewddur! What a sweet little piece! I love how you show the wonderful playful side of Fflewddur, and am so happy that Llyan made a cameo as well. Too cute _

haha too cute :D Fflewddur is so adorable and eager to please; I can totally see him playing hide-and-go-seek with some kids.