|Reviews for Memory|
| ATrueGryffindor 6/29/11 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I love this! I read it a while ago but I don't think I reviewed (and if I did, it was obviously anonymously). I couldn't stop thinking about because I really want to write about Zoe but I just can't do it and part of the reason is because I keep on thinking about your idea. It's what immediately pops into my head when I think of her (and I think of her often; she's on of my favorite characters). It's truly amazing. It captures every emotion perfectly.
| Elphaba98 4/5/11 . chapter 1
This is cool. My only problem is that Hercules is the roman version of Heraklease and the rest of the story is Greek. Great story, I hope you write more like this.
| Lynch 1/5/11 . chapter 1
Very good. Of course, I am desperately in love with anything about Zoe, so I suppos it may be blind praise, but... yah. So... How's life? how're the kids? Did you get that new tv you wanted? :) I do that when I can't think of anything to say. Like we're old pals. :) right. So, excellent writing, see you when I see you!
| Whisper of the Moonlight River 12/4/10 . chapter 1
This is a great story; my style generally. I think all of your efforts are worth it; I'll definitely remember this story and add it to my favourites (I know that I'm not logged in right now, but I like being anonymous) A masterpiece, rare to find in fanfics.
| Shrrgnien 9/2/10 . chapter 1
I do love the Greek cursing, though I would probably have enjyed it even more without the translatins; bmaye just a comment on how she would never have been able to get away with this if Artemis could hear her, or something. Leaving it to the imagination might have heightened the efect, but it still definitely worked, so no worries. I generally use Shakesperean stuff if I have Zoe cursing ("generally"; I've only done it once, but whatever.)
*pause for breath*
This was good. Not unbelievably brilliant, but very good nonetheless, a breath of air for this poor much-abused character. (Why? /Why/ must people work with Zoe if they don't know how to capture her character?) But I digress. You did very, very well, and I enjoyed this.
| Faded Classic 9/1/10 . chapter 1
Lovely story, AK! I like it a lot, I really do. Seems to be pretty accurate, and not much OOC-ness. I like the greek curses, though. XD
| hp-not harry potter 8/31/10 . chapter 1
Wow... So... realistic! And cannon, and simply just... good writing. A big surprise here on fanfiction these days. I salute you, true writer, I salute.
| kaleidoscopeflowers 8/30/10 . chapter 1
I luffle you, Ave. *glomps* And it's not just because I beta'd this that I really like it.
It was well-written and gave a nice insight into Zoe's character-I had always wondered how the relationship between her and Pleione was (and yeah, I would have liked to see more of that) but I liked the fact that she joined Hercules to try and rebel against her family.../end ramble
Yeah, so...in short, I liked it.
| Infinity Blues 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this was really good! I didnt find any mistakes, and I loved the premise.
My fav part was her cursing. :D I noticed she says "bastard" a lot. :P
| hhhfhfhfhfhf 8/30/10 . chapter 1
That was really good. I love how you portrayed Zoe, not a lot of people can pull that off, but congradulation, you did!
The greek in it was funny and amazing, funnily enough, I didn't die, reviewing. Have fun!
*give Ave a piece of vitural chewing gum*
| Your Sugar Sits Untouched 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Great job, Ave. I really liked it :)
You're portrayal of Zoe was excellent, and the writing was lovely. :D
| asimplecritic 8/30/10 . chapter 1
*tries to think of something else to say**can't*
*ends fail review*
| Ariadne's Twine 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Oh, dear, Ave. This is great. I really love the Greek curse words.
I only see a few minor mistakes, nothing to worry about.
| Shiner Shining Bright 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Really well-written. I like it. :D