| Reviews for Bright Sunny Skies |
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yamiishot 10/14/11 . chapter 1Aww that was awfully sweet :3 |
Minevera Elizabeth Juniper 3/28/11 . chapter 1Love it. :) |
Musafreen 9/29/10 . chapter 1Argh. This is adorable. It really is. :) |
Writah 9/17/10 . chapter 1 Awwwww. Too cute. |
ChocolateEclar 9/9/10 . chapter 1Lovely. Beckett was perfectly adorable and knew just how to make Artemis feel better. "I spy an empty sky." I love Beckett's innocent confusion over this line. :) |
silverphoenix 9/2/10 . chapter 1 I'm trying to think of constructive criticism or at least a well-rounded critique to give you, but all I can think of is "OMG, SO CUTE!" LOL. :) |
Beckett Simpleton 9/1/10 . chapter 1Awww. Kissies from Beckett! :) |
Xx starlight-moon xX 8/31/10 . chapter 1This was adorable! Really. Myles and Beckett are cute anyway, ofc, but you really captured them both (I have a strong urge to squish little Beckett. Ahem.) and Artemis too. (I loved Beckett's observations on his brother.) The relationship between the brothers was perfectly played, and the hints of A / H very subtle, but still lovely. (Is it just me or was The Atlantis Complex doing some HEAVY A / H hinting of its own? Even taking Orion out of the equation.) "I spy an empty sky." :) (My absolute favourite line, that one.) This was wonderfully written, anyway, and I loved it. I'm shocked you don't have more reviews, actually. If I weren't typing this while ill and laid up in bed with a foggy head, I'd give you a much better one. Hopefully this makes you smile anyway. Thanks for posting! |
nekodreamstealer 8/30/10 . chapter 1Aww...poor Arty... |
CherryBerryB 8/30/10 . chapter 1 AWWWWWWW THATS SO CUTE |