Loved this. So poignant.

You ended it perfectly.

I really appreciated this story. It didn't read like typical fanfic. It was introspective and dark and ugly sometimes. But more honest because that is how people are (or at least they way I think they are). You are one of those writers that just gets it. Who says the things others are thinking and keeping only in their heads. Thank you for sharing your story.

Being in Bellas head was fascinating! Great story!

I just started this story, is there something clinically wrong with Bella because she's not right in the head?

Nothing makes sense to me. I have no idea what is going on.

Thank you for this story. It was a ride that showed how low Bella's life was and how Edward had really waited for her to come back to him. It show the trial and day-to-day problems that had occurred in both of their lives. It showed the love that they both have for each other grow. Edward would do anything and help Bella heal. She was his "forever". Nice!

Hello, I just started reading your story and I'm reading hoping to figure out what Bella did. I've figured out that she had an affair with the republican fellow running for/or already president of U.S. At the end of this chapter you asked if there were any questions and I had a good laugh. Of course, I have lots of questions, which hopefully will be answered as I read on.

B is such a bitch! Her mind is so polluted.

Wow. Great writing and great characters as well - real, flawed , comlex. It took a long time to like your Bella, get past the ugliness in her head. Thanks so much.

So is Bella supposed to be like Monica Lewinsky or something similar? And by the sound of things I'm guessing that Alice outed her? Very publicly! And with lots of pictures!

Could be very interesting.

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I absolutely LOVED this story! I happened upon it last night and could not stop reading. I stayed up until 2am reading the first 19 chapters then rushed home after work to finish it up. I have to tell you that I have a hard time reading Bella's POV because they are always the same tone and dialect but this one was in a league of its own. The rhyme and rhythm kept me entranced. I found myself actually crying in many chapters, it touched me that much. Your writing style is one I don't read very often and it was like you reached into my head and wrote how I tend to think. I was saddened by this Bella but at the same time so amused. Her snark and despair and the way you relayed it just made me believe this was a real story. (Yes I do remember the Monica incident but never really thought about her fallout)I loved this Edward. He wasn't this infallible character that so many other writers tend to write him as...he was real with flaws and limited patience. I am so glad that I found this story and I have already tweeeted its praises. Now I want to read more of your stories and as soon as I put the little ones off to bed I will start another. Thank you for sharing this story with us, it was by far one of the best I have read in a long, long time!

Great story. Loved the characters.

I really loved this story. I love that you didn't end it with everything being perfectly wrapped up in a neat little package. There were still things wrong at the end. Bella's relationship with her parents was still strained. Bella's happy to have a job, but she knows she's still got some rough times ahead. But hey, that's life. That's real. Great job.

read in 1 night, entirely. LOVED IT!