wow sounds good already plz update soon

Oh...this looks interesting. I really, really want to see what happens next but, after checking how long it's been since you put out this first chapter, I'm afraid I never will. Would it help if I groveled? Please...please...PLEASE write more of this? Please?

Really cool start! Are you going to continue?

o this is so good please write more soon because this is really good. *bows to your coolness*

Interesting beginning. (And an injured -someone- never hurts either.) _

I know, I know, I'm a stupid picky person, but I HAVE to point out that Stingmon is a Virus-type, not a Vaccine... o.O;;; Um... Yeah.. I know that is VERY stupid of me but, when I saw it I imedialy said "He's a virus." I dunno if that is completely okay for somebody like me to know these things but... I DO! . Anyway, it is a GREAT story, and I highly suggest that you keep on writing it (You MUST keep on writing "These Fine Things on Heaven and Earth" though... TAIKEN! EEEEEKK! I LUV IT!) because if you don't, I'll have my rabid chickens come after you and peck your eyes out! Sic 'em, Chicky! J/K! .;;

eee! good fic! please write the next chapter!

Oh! interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes.

*widens eyes* Oô I'll make this short and snappy; adored your every word. The choice of description sure was wonderful, you never stop amazing me, Vain. :) Boy, oh boy, the other writers will surely get a whole lot of competition now you're in...Topping this won't be easy, I know it.

Ahhh! What happened next? I gotta know! I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat when I was reading this! The story made me me feel as if something was about to jump out at me! I love it!

I love this. *bows* A worthy entry in a fabulous contest!