I think I never comme ted in the last chapter, so here it is!

I love it so much! So happy that Doug and Carol got married, that Doug adopted Zach and that you didn't forget Tess and Kate!

Keep on with the good work!

Hope to hear from you soon,

Sandy

Just finished... ) Amazing ! (And now I'm even more in love with Doug... my my...)

Hey, pretty good AU story about Doug and Carol.

I think about the thing between Tag and Carol would happened if they got married. I had a gut feeling about it because I know ER pretty well.

Good thing Carol got custody of Zach and has Doug and the twins in that story.

Aw, definitely a cute chapter to end with! There isn't much to say that I haven't said before, but this story really was great. You definitely are going out on a high note with this one. Really, really great job!

Awww, lovely ending! I'm glad everything turned out for Carol, Doug and Zach, they'll be a happy family!

Now I'm kinda sad that this will soon be over because I loved reading this story :)

Aw, such a perfect ending! It's obviously perfect for them, because they're together and John is gone and it's great. Very good job, Kate...one of your best written stories so far.

I'm really looking forward to the last "chapter"...can't wait to read it!

:)

Agh, this was almost too much drama for me to handle! Haha, not in a bad way of course, just a whole lot of violence.

I really liked your closing sentence...though I hope Zach doesn't have to be knocked unconscious again, I hope they get to hold each other all the time because it's just so cute.

I feel like all my reviews are just blending together at this point, so I'm going to refrain from saying good job even though it was a good chapter ;)

Aw, this is probably my favorite so far! It was a nice break from the angst...the drama isn't bad, but it's nice to see my smiles :)

Great job! I can't believe there are only three left...

Aw, this was almost heart wrenching to read. I feel awful for Zach...I can't imagine being that young and having to deal with your parents going through that. I know lots of kids do have to deal with that, but still...it sucks.

Really well done.

Awwwwwwwwwwww...just awwwwwwwwwwwww *squeeeeeeeeeee* Loveee the ending of this chapter!

Woohoo!

Finally some initiative on Doug's part! I'm so happy he's finally making the step towards Carol. I'm really, really looking forward to him actually getting to Chicago and, hopefully, Carol welcoming him back into her life for good.

Fantastic job as always, Kate :)

Ta-da! It's working, finally.

Fabulous job! The whole history of Zach leading into the current situation was great...at first I was a little confused as to where you were going, but once I saw the correlation, I really liked the way you did it.

Also, I really enjoyed the small internal battles Doug and Carol were going through towards the end. So typical for them, :)

Aw, a nice change of pace! I really did enjoy the focus on Mark and Susan...it was really sweet. And I loved how your portrayed the awkwardness so well. Definitely true to their characters, I'd say. And Mark's "Ditto" was just perfect.

Awesome job!

Yay, Mark and Susan! I'm happy for them!

Keep the good work going!

You were right: I definitely like this one! So much drama, but it's not petty, you know? It's legitimate, and really heartfelt...

I especially loved the last line, about Zach seeing Doug comforting Carol..really awesome.

:)