WOW! I didn't quite get into his madness at first, and I tried to understand what had happened and what timeline it was, but then it all became so hurtingly clear. Very well written. Thank you.

Nic.

This was so great! I loved it.

That was disturbing and good! :D

very good!

Wow. Excellent piece of writing. Your Spike is just how I think he could be if he was pushed that far. The Willow characterization is good too. This is very dark and creepy. Love it!

Oh my god. I loved it! - Gasp. - It was so sweet! And and and so sad! - Worships. -

Reminds me of "Memento" in a twisted kind of way. Very, very well-written - horrifying but strangely heartbrealing.

Thanks, Havoc. You always give really good B/S. This one's even darker than normal, but I liked it. A well written, deranged Spike is almost always fun.

that was sad..very sad. wonderfully written though, heh. rawr xx

Okay you made me cry, damnit! Very good. Twisted and dark. I like that.

Damn. I mean, _DAMN_. That was pretty... erm... uh... what's the word... oh, right. Screwed up. I think Spike wouldn't go that far. But whatever. Your story. Nice writing, and I can honestly say it is an original idea. So kudos for that.

Whoa. This story is intense. Very well-written, though, and an interesting - if morbid - premise. And you did a good job of making Spike simultaneously creepy and sad, which is a pretty impressive achievement.