This was a beautiful story. Any sequels? Also, there could be the possibility of a ruined Seele building having a Kawrou clone in the rubble, waiting for someone to open the pod? Just a thought.

It's so sad, but it's also very cute! How I wish that Kaworu wasn't the one to die... At least his spirit is staying with Shinji...

I remember reading this story about 5 months ago on a different website. It gets better everytime I read it. _
-Rocku

OMG I

A simply beautiful piece. I enjoyed it very much. _

Wow! This story was so good! If you plan to...Please write more! I love stories about the affections betweem Shinji-kun and Kaworu-kun, they are just so dreamy! . Loveth Mel

That was so sad! I think i might cry! beautiful work

despite that this fic is yaoi implied, *sniff* it was beautiful, i loved it. If only parents would spend more time with their children this would never have happend, but because of his father's carelesness the inevitable happend... Shinji turned out to be queer..

I really like this one. I hope you write more about the world's most spiritually perfect couple.

Well written. Good work. I especially liked the idea of Shinji turning to art to soothe his soul.(I'm an artist too.)

This is one of the best Shinji/Kaworu fan fictions I have ever read. Extremely well written and emotional. The elements of saddness and acceptance were captured with perfection and the theme of the colors red and grey constantly brings the reader back to Shinji's stream of consciousness: his thoughts of Kaworu. The symbolism is used very well, especially Shinji's final decision with his art. Congradulations on this masterpiece of writing.

I don't suppose you've seen the movies? EoE possibly? I really hate it when people skip over those. Be creative, god damnit! Use the movies!