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| spinningleaves 2008-08-18 ch 12, | abuseGreat, great piece! So heartfelt. I love the way that each person's point of view gives us insight into them, but also into everyone around them. High quality work! |
| Violet Shadows 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseI really should have posted individual reviews...but, I didn't. Honestly? It was mostly because I was crying through most of the fic. |
| Violet Shadows 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHoly ** that was good, you don't see to many times Filch actually gets a decent deal, so this was rather nice...almost makes me want to go write a fic about him. |
| Bob-sama 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is such a good fanfic! I hope you write more, less depressing ones too! |
| Angelwings23123 2008-06-10 ch 12, | abuseVery sad. Will you be continueing with this or is it abandoned? |
| Rodrigo Black Potter 2008-06-07 ch 12, | abuseGREAT FIC!! best drama fic I ever read! a truly amazing work!! teh way you use secondary character is manazing, and I'm just crying for hal an hour. I believe that you shouldn't use primary characters, just secondary, because we never know what cause a person to commit suicide, what was the final blow... maybe you should out, or not... actually do whatever you want, cause your fic is so great that I can't say anything. amazing job, really loved the way you have done the characters!! try to update soon, ok? |
| emikae 2008-04-26 ch 11, | abuseGod i've searched ages for this fic, ever since i read it a few years ago. Let me say again, that it is very well written, and evokes emotion. MIght i suggest a scene from vernon's pov? I hope to see more of the wonderfully written in memorium. |
| BOOMrobotdog 2008-03-06 ch 12, | abuseOMG, I read this story posted on a different site, and I cried my eyes out. It was just so... sad and deep and it hit some core within me that I couldn't stop. I was just sitting there in the dark, crying :( This story is very moving. I'm glad that I found it on here so I could comment. This is definitely the best suicide/attempted suicide fic I have read. A lot of the fics out there are too trite, and don't touch upon the emotions enough. It feels as if they are echoing the emotions of someone else, but this one was great. I loved that it was from the perspective of those left behind. Good job, |
| alydhe 2008-01-16 ch 12, | abuseThis is so sad and so good! I would really love to see more of this. Any chance you're going to update soon? Severus and Draco are the biggest ones I'd love to see. Though I do also wonder what Harry is thinking about all this in the afterlife. Knowing him, he probably never thought that he was so important to people that he would leave them all so completely devastated. I must say, I really like Draco's reaction. He seems so angry and lost without his rival, his opposite. |
| merilynne 2008-01-12 ch 12, | abuseI really love this concept, and I love your characterizations of all the different P.O.V.s. Although some chapters are better written than others (Hagrid's chapter on a whole didn't end up touching me as much, and the ending sounded a bit contrived compared to the brilliance of the ending of Neville's chapter), on the whole, all of them are wonderful. The structure of the fanfic reminds me of Faulkner's As I Lay Dying, albeit decidedly less...post-modern. It's somewhat saddening that this fic was last updated in 2003. I was really looking forward to Harry's last word on everything! I do hope you'll update, someday in the future. |
2007-11-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseI'm sure that you have heard this a million and one times but this story is just simply brillant. I never bother with reviews because I know that quite frankly anything I have to say has probably been said many times but for this story I have to make an exception. Not to be cliche but many times as the angsting teenager that I am I have wanted and tried my hand at suicide. I will still try but the sheer beauty of this story will always stay with me. The characterisations are plain poetry and the painful lumps at my throat are testiment to this fact. Personally this fic touched me to use such a overly-used term and has left its mark. You are an amazing writer, the pure raw power of each individual persons pain was mind-blowing. Lets just say if you ever wanted to become Prime Minister you already have my vote. lol. I sing you praises... Now that this grovelling at your writing prowess is done... Bye You rock my world... lol |
| Fishheads 2007-10-07 ch 12, | abuseI have so far been moved to tears by two stories. This is one of them. |
| Amsuhl 2007-09-15 ch 10, | abuseOh Merlin. I'll kill him. Hilarious. I find this idea captivating. But please do update- |
| Amsuhl 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseWait, wait, wait. Harry killed himself? Did I hear right? |
| glassdragon2 2007-04-13 ch 12, | abuseThis is such a tragic story! Why did he do it? ...Perhaps there is no answer. Please continue it though, the characters need closure if there is any to be found. |