Wow. I can't believe I just found this fic. It's a beautiful, heart-breaking one. Poor Chloe.

So sad, and so utterly beautiful!

Teresa, you have such a gift for emotions. Your Clark is so beautiful, he's the real Clark for me. I love him so much. If I didn't already, you'd make me.

I love your writing, I love your work. Please, write many, many more SV fics. I haven't read a book for a long time, I'm contented with your fics, they are so much better than most of the printed books.

Please, write more fics about Clark. He's inmortal, but you make him more so.

Thank you for so much beauty, for so many emotions, for Clark, for the happiness you bring to me with every line.

exquisitely painful. lovely. mysterious. gonna check what else you've written.

okay, i think i get this.

chloe is telling superman that he has to save the clark part of him, or it will die.

am i right? please tell me either way, and if i'm wrong, can someone explain it to me?

it's a great story though, what i got of it. very emotive.

I may be dense; but who did it? Who was Chloe 'talking' to at the end?

Also, this was a very good . . . great, story. Very very great. *sigh* So sad and angsty. I loved it.

Wow - I love the twist you put on this. More please. Don't stop it there. I especially liked the way Clark died as Romeo - a very clever ending. Now make sure it gets fixed so it doesn't end for C&C like it did for R&J! Loving it so far.

Okay, there has to be more to this one... You can't just leave it there. You aren't leaving it there... are you?

Good story, though you may want to make it a bit clearer that it was orchestrated by someone in the future, and that Chloe went through a time portal, and that the man and woman were Superman, and presumably Lois Lane.

(For all those people that didn't get it).

It wasn't that confusing though, I did actually get it on the first read.

:)

this is good, sad but good, though it got a bit confusing at the end

you are a very talented writer. i'm sorry i found this so late.

Ooh! Ooh ooh!

I just read this for the 200th time, and I think I finally figured it out!

It's Superman, right? It's Superman. Chloe finds Superman and tells him he has to save himself. He has to save Clark, he's the only one who can, and if he doesn't, then he'll simply cease to exist. Right? Right?

I'm extremely curious, and extremely anxioius. Please please PLEASE, e-mail me and tell if I'm right or not. I totally loved this! I cried!

Wow! Who did it? I thought it was Whitney but then why would he try to save Clark? Who are the people at the end? Again I thought Whitney and Lana, but then again...no! Is there more?

Wow...

Thank god it wasn't real! That was a superb story, though.

wow. . . that was really good. Are you gonna write another chapter? either way it's awesome.

very emotional story, but wonderful.