I decided to reread this story this weekend and was wowed all over again. I wanted to let you know that I love the story. This is fantastic writing too. Thanks for sharing it!

Oh my gosh, OH MY GOSH, I have no real words other than "I encourage you to continue this!" because I am somewhat selfish and really do want to know what's going to happen. I just adore a good story I can't peg within the first ten minutes of reading and this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Since I read a lot, it is amazing this has jumped overnight into one of the top twenty out of thousands. Best of luck and much joy.

update?

Please continuee it! Pretty please?

Buaaahhhh, so much angst! But I loved it (does that make me a masochist?). Kudoos!

Poor Sephi needs a kissing-tutorial

OMG, this chapter is so emotional, especially the last part. It's beautiful.

Argh, the sexual tension is soooooo good, but it's killing me. But I really love the way you're writing this. You're not pushing them too fast, and Cloud is still trying to get over his own demons. It's very realistic.

WHAT THE FRICK CLOUD! Darn Hojo.

oh, this is my favorite chapter yet

you might want to give your chapters another read through; they're riddled with typos, mistaken homonyms (things like "statues" instead of "status", for example) and a few small grammatical mistakes

it's still a nice story, though, I like it

oh :(

Nice.

Uwaa Poor Cloud, trying so hard to appear strong towards the people he's (slowly but surely) caring about!

Thanks for writing this. I really love how you write all the characters (I'm so amazed by your Tseng *3* I love how he's not always this unaffected jerkass that some people try to make him into).

_ Waaah! More more more! I must know what happens! This story is so good D:

Please, please one day continue