KYAAA3 I just love it to pieces! I saved this on my phone, got bored in english and read this. My teacher caught me and started to read it out in front of the class. Got loads of wolf whistles and a round of applause at the end so that means you got my class to like it (and my teacher!) You did an amazing job I wanna read what happens after this. Damn it I'm rambling again sorrry about that! w Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read your other stories!

awwwww...score, that was one of the hotest smut ever, and I love Roxas and Axel having the choice,if whoever wants to be topping. Oh I hope Axel's wrists are better, that was beautifully done!

ngjdjake. I. loved. this.

Sssoooooooooo adorable! I luved it!

oh smut. fast paced with plenty of tsundere roxas. good job. keep it up!

nice!

Gasp! Why have I not read this one-shot sooner?

God. This was mind-blowing and I swear I could fall unconscious right now from too much blood loss caused by a nosebleed. ;)

Lots of love for this!

XOXO

omg LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE SOOOO SO SO SO MUCH.

that was probably the hottest chapter you've written so far, second place being the SoRiku lime in Accidental Infatuations.

OMG like LOVE. SO MUCH.

[dom uke's FTW]

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That was so hot! xD! I really liked it, and I have a feeling I'm gonna read it more than just this once ;)

Overall-very sexy, good plot development.

You had a few spelling errors, but that happens to the best of us. [not reffering to my self, trust me, I'm hardley any good]

I would like to point out you constantly spelled blonde "blond". In fact, I don't belive it was spelled correctly during the entire fic.

Other than that, great job :d

Awe that was actually really cute along with hot! haha Good job :D

So I kept skipping over this story...I don't know why and then I said why the hell not...my only regret...not doing it sooner ;D

OMG 12,000 words! you always write so much, esp for oneshots, but i always love reading them 3

as usual, your story's got great plot, your amazing diction never ceases to attract me to your writing, and your detailed smut- cant decribe it ;)

and most of this is from experience? hmm, you've piqued my interest in working at a hotel for a bit XD

actually, after reading your summary about a drunk Axel, the first person with Larxene who came to mind was him, but i just couldnt imagine Axel wearing a skirt and heels xD thank god you said PINK hair xD

haha im commenting just 2 days short of a month after AkuRoku day, so dont you worry about being late. besides, with writing skills like yours, AkuRoku day should be late for you 3

LOL the moments in this story made me laugh.

Honestly, though I liked it greatly. xD

Thanks for the read.

Man they make working sound easy!

But anyway...wow, you've always written some of the best lemons out there not to mention the best one-shots. I'm running on of compliments to say!