I applaud you. I truly applaud you.

This is by far one of the best Ranma pieces I have ever read in my life - the movement, the excitment, the drama - in all, you sustained the tension and emotion constantly throughout the piece, not allowing yourself to be bogged down in unnecessary lulls. Siimply put the depth of the raw emotion displayed is amazing, truly sucessful. As a writer who appreciates and rarely finds this quality in plotline and execution, I must say that this has made me supremely happy.

All in all, it made my night. I wanted to read a great Ranma piece, and was rewarded.

A masterpiece.

QBC

Interesting...a bit dark, though. You should go more into what brought the dark stuff about...and another chapter or two just to see where it goes from here.

Great story... my only problem is that some of the scenes seem a bit rushed.

Looking forward to more!

...WoW! I am...awe-struck!...I can say safely though: I LUVD IT! I was so blown away by ur writin and i still am! IT was AWSUM! Iv added u 2 my fave authors and cnt wait 2 check out more of your stuff lata.

I g2g rit now, so hope 2 read more soon! _

Keep on ritin! _

this is a stupid ending

i don't even seem finish

how can it be complete

you should update another chapter for a better ending

oh my god this is great you have to post real soon. -

Ranma really is so...very...scaring... :shudder: I don't think I like this side of him. Your writing style is great, as always. Still, this is one of the lesser fics you wrote, simply because of Ranma's rather twisted behavior. It's really very disturbing.

Wow! I REALLY love your writing.. This is such an intense story.. although Ranma is portrayed a little bit like a very horny animal or something, not that it bothers me, it kinda made him look hot.. (ok, i admit it, i wanted to be Akane for a second there..) Oh my... i'm gonna have some interesting dreams after reading this! ;

will there be any more update on this story?

update soon

Beautiful. Your words are passionate and the meaning behind them strong. I love it.

this story is great

update soon

dude you awesome love love love it you da bomb i luv ranma and akane fics iv read this a thousand times and it keeps getting better!

WOW
THAT WAS GOOD KEEP IT UP!

Very cool; hope there will be more to come, although it doesn't look like it...