Reviews for The Perfect Moment
Kind Baudelaire 3/2/12 . chapter 6
Amazing just so romantic.
plaincrazysuckup 7/5/11 . chapter 4
Hogwarts doesn't have a nurse's office, it has a Hospital Wing
NinjaBuddy 10/12/10 . chapter 6
Not too shabby.

Yes, it's a little disappointing that James wasn't Head Boy, but it was still decent.

I would like to know how Frank and Alice got together after this...?

3NinjaBuddy
fairytaledreamer212 10/9/10 . chapter 6
Omgggg, I loved this story! Your writing is amazing - keep it up!
meeplesforthewin 9/22/10 . chapter 6
sorry this is my second review but i won't go all out again hahaha... um this is really really great and i love how Sirius said "what's your damage?" to Snape, it reminded me of you xD

and also this makes me feel really bad for Alice, poor Alice. James was such an idiot but I'm glad you didn't make it so that James was totally inthe wrong and vice versa because stories like that really bug me :D

and your description's wonderful... I love Remus and Sirius (especially when he said "Yeah, let's steal all his socks", and when he advised James about the Ball) and how they were arguing about his essay at the beginning :D

I can't find anything to criticize xP

daisyinthefield2
meeplesforthewin 9/21/10 . chapter 1
Hey, um.. this rocks. :D

daisyinthefield2
DracoHermioneForever 9/17/10 . chapter 6
WOAH! SUBSCRIBED! This is amazing UPDATE LIKE NOW :D
verecundus 9/16/10 . chapter 6
Aw, adorable! Great chapter! (:
justagirlwithideas 9/16/10 . chapter 6
that was so cute! great work :)
Guest 9/13/10 . chapter 5
Haha, James really is thick sometimes. Even Peter got it (just saying). I love you story so far! You write so well! Keep updating!
Guest 9/13/10 . chapter 4
Nice story! Love the chapter name. Snivellus MUST Die! :P
A Rose With Many Thorns 9/12/10 . chapter 1
Congratulations, you have been added to my community for having a wonderful James/Lily story. Awesome story.
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 5
Aw, cute! Can't wait for the next chapter (:
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 4
Aw I love Sirius, suggesting they steal Snape's socks hahaha. Really awesome, I'm loving this :D
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 3
Awww this makes me love the Marauders even more now! Great job (:
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