| Reviews for The Perfect Moment |
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Kind Baudelaire 3/2/12 . chapter 6Amazing just so romantic. |
plaincrazysuckup 7/5/11 . chapter 4Hogwarts doesn't have a nurse's office, it has a Hospital Wing |
NinjaBuddy 10/12/10 . chapter 6Not too shabby. Yes, it's a little disappointing that James wasn't Head Boy, but it was still decent. I would like to know how Frank and Alice got together after this...? 3NinjaBuddy |
fairytaledreamer212 10/9/10 . chapter 6Omgggg, I loved this story! Your writing is amazing - keep it up! |
meeplesforthewin 9/22/10 . chapter 6sorry this is my second review but i won't go all out again hahaha... um this is really really great and i love how Sirius said "what's your damage?" to Snape, it reminded me of you xD and also this makes me feel really bad for Alice, poor Alice. James was such an idiot but I'm glad you didn't make it so that James was totally inthe wrong and vice versa because stories like that really bug me :D and your description's wonderful... I love Remus and Sirius (especially when he said "Yeah, let's steal all his socks", and when he advised James about the Ball) and how they were arguing about his essay at the beginning :D I can't find anything to criticize xP daisyinthefield2 |
meeplesforthewin 9/21/10 . chapter 1Hey, um.. this rocks. :D daisyinthefield2 |
DracoHermioneForever 9/17/10 . chapter 6WOAH! SUBSCRIBED! This is amazing UPDATE LIKE NOW :D |
verecundus 9/16/10 . chapter 6Aw, adorable! Great chapter! (: |
justagirlwithideas 9/16/10 . chapter 6that was so cute! great work :) |
Guest 9/13/10 . chapter 5 Haha, James really is thick sometimes. Even Peter got it (just saying). I love you story so far! You write so well! Keep updating! |
Guest 9/13/10 . chapter 4 Nice story! Love the chapter name. Snivellus MUST Die! :P |
A Rose With Many Thorns 9/12/10 . chapter 1Congratulations, you have been added to my community for having a wonderful James/Lily story. Awesome story. |
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 5Aw, cute! Can't wait for the next chapter (: |
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 4Aw I love Sirius, suggesting they steal Snape's socks hahaha. Really awesome, I'm loving this :D |
verecundus 9/12/10 . chapter 3Awww this makes me love the Marauders even more now! Great job (: |