That was great! This is one of my favorite scenes between Horatio and Pellew, and your interpretation was wonderful.

peaces,

-Lady E

this was a really good piece! there should be more stories like yours on HH. i just had to review! the pace is just right. the reflection was good and the tone was in character. however, the ending was a bit too direct, maybe some kind of symbolism or subtlety could have done there, anyway, this was a really wonderful piece.

brilliant!

Miranda