well if vegeta visits ... poor town .good story anyway.

Ha! This was awesome! I love Eighteen, she such a bad **!:D

You are seriously god!

ROTFLMAO!! I don't usually read DBZ fics (this one was a rec from someone) but hehehe, had me giggling at work^^

Good job.

It didn't make much sense, but I didn't read very carefully. Yay for 18.

this is a perfect example of what eighteen would be like as a mother. perfectly executed. i love reading it and i'll probably read it again.

AW! How cute.

Hilarious! You are an outstanding writer!

XD That was great.

Funneh as teh hells from which teh evil Juunanagou came. WHich is funny cause of all the weak little idiots living there coughFriezacoughBabidicoughGerocough

LOL Go 18! Good work on this little oneshot. I liked it, a lot. And by Uncle, I'm assuming you mean Vegeta, right? ;)

*grins widely* That was funny ^^

That Was awsome it makes me wish I had #18 for a mother
Last year my assitant principal was out to get me and my sisters she was trying to ruin me every chance she got. She even tried to keep my prized card collection when she got it from the classroom where id left

She blasted out my mother (Who's way to nice for her own good, but a great Cook!!)in the upstairs halls and then called me out of class and told me all this junk about she just wants to be my freind and to think of her as Big-sister.

AS IF!

i'd like to see chapter 2 with "uncle 17"

Man this was mondo AWESOME! hilarious dude really. this was all cute and really funny. I liked every little thing.

Terrific work at this my friend, keep the humour talent up. this was so super cool and funny, i can go on for ages! ^-^

~C18G~