Perfect ending. You applied the saying well to Prim, but one thing is that you should change the title. Is it Japanese? More people will probably read these drabbles if they can understand the title. If they look at the title and don't understand it they may just skip the summary and not read the story. This can happen a lot on here considering the junk you have to go through at times to find a well written fanfiction! Anyway, I still loved this and am favoriting