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| Reviews for The Short Second Life of Kyle Vega |
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   lovedoesn'thurt 8/20/11 . chapter 1I like your story, but start a new line when someone is talking, k? It's just a tip, keep writing :-) |
| CosmicLOVE1996 9/7/10 . chapter 1 very confusing to read. Needs Point of Views. IT THE TRUTH -Fire&Rain- |
