When'd you finish this? It's been too long since I last checked , obviously. Anyway, I didn't think the end was too sappy, and it made me wish once again that they didn't all die in the movie. Poor Neil and Jane, doomed to never fulfill their love...

I can't help but wonder why Neil has a pink blanket in the first place... But I'm shocked that Jane's actually using it. It's the hormones, isn't it? She's getting so feminine! Well, if you ignore the fact she's been beating the crap outta a lot of people.

Hm... What do I want? You can't do really happy without making it a sappy AU. Or something really weird, which you're also good at. Give 'em some happiness, since they're gonna die anyway. *sob* I don't want them to die... They always die on me!

Since they're going to die in 3 weeks anyway... go for broke. Original-not-happy-at-all ending. Er... wait. Do I take that back? Maybe they should have a little "happy" before they go. Bah. This is why I dont write anymore. Too many variables. Too many "what-ifs."

Yeah. I take it back. I want some happy. So... happy-tragic.

I really like this fic. But it's not gonna end well, is it? The dates finally sank in... Poor Jane. Poor Neil. Is he even going to know? Sorry it's taken me so long to review. I've been neglecting reading fics for too long.

*stares* Okay, I didn't see that coming. Is that for real? Heh, Jane really, really needs to be more careful. This story has just taken an interesting twist.

I was right I've been wondering if that was it since chappie 4.*Gives herself a cookie* Anyway I love this story. You have to write more.

You seem to think of little details of their lives that never occur to anyone, like the bit about the children in the orphanage being destined for enlistment. That's a nice touch to the TSW universe, making it seem more fleshed out.

And too bad Gray had to interrupt them; I wanted to see what was going to happen! LOL.

I like the way that Neil and Jane are playing off each other. The interaction is very realistic, please continue!

*grin* For some reason, I can imagine Neil liberating the mice from a lab... I especially liked the mice-in-his-pants scenario!

This story most definately deserves more credit (reviews) than it is given. I sincerely hope you'll go on to finish this in the near future. It'd be a shame if it wasn't.

You're not... stopping your writing, are you? You can't! There are so few TSW writers! Anyway, I don't see what kind of problem you have with this story. I like it!

*grins* NO! Honestly, woman, I was being a nice, kindly soul. Is that too hard for you to comprehend? *sniffles and hugs her Ryan plushie*

And I'm sticking by my original review.

It's great, it's great, I hate you. *grins*

W00t? No more stories from Terra? *sniff*

At least just take a vacation...

Your Neil may be a control freak, but my version is a bit of a prankster, and this wouldn't have been beyond him. I like it, though. Don't discontinue!