It is really lovely! If you have the time i really hope that youvwrite a longer story or more oneshots!

Fantastic! With a lovely OC, a gorgeous Melot (more people have to write about him!)... And amazingly sweet lines, descriptions that tell more then overly large dialogues...!

This, for example: amazing! :

"Though Daneal could usually find shapes in anything, there were none to be found in the firelight as it danced with its own shadows on the ceiling above Melot's bed. Here there was only color and movement and beauty. But it was still captivating. What she loved the most about fire was how no flame was ever the same twice, and so too was the case with its shadows."

Love it , very realistic , any plans to make it longer or start a longer story ?

What a lovely story! I really enjoyed reading this, and I liked your OC. I think you portrayed Melot very well, and all the descriptive detail you put into this was brilliant. Very well done - I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

Hey I have to say I love Elisa and The Waves has inspired me to write a couple of stories as well.

I think the story is well written, it flows nicely and it seems like you did your research about it.

I was also glad to find this story since nobody seems to write about Melot. I think his character has a lot of potential, and well I have to admit that Henry Cavill was ridiculously gorgeous playing him :)