Wonderful! That was just greatly inspired and sweet! Definitely humorous as well... I can't imagine Squall singing those lyrics! Thank you for writing this. (Btw.. I didn't know you were a guy.. o.o)

That was a cute little story! I like how humor, suspense, romance, and sadness are all blended in well, and make the story flow smoothly. The ending was done very well. Your story made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, which is uncommon for me!

aw, that was really sweet. You did an excellent job of showing Squall's feelings. Very good work.

oooohhh. _ what more can i say? i'm mirrorring rinoa's 'most embarrassed, happiest grin' right now. what a sweet fic to start the day! the singing was a very nice touch, totally unexpected. :) keep writing! tee hee.

Oh! I don't usually have the guts to read something like this, but I did, and I'm glad! This is sweet, and Zell's mention at the end was wonderful! It had me cracking up...

awww that was a good story i especially like that dedication part at the end that sets it off

that was very sweet

That was cute. Just when I thought it wouldn't get any weirder... he starts SINGING? And Zell spews out what he was chewing?

Oh How sweet...i love it:)

I this story! Its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! hehe! Im being mad! This story is so sweet its going on my favourites lists! I love it!

What an adorable story! Cleary expressed and full of sweetness. A wonderful job well done. My best to you and your wife. :)

Awww! That was too cute! Continue?