|Reviews for If I stay: Mia's poem|
| Guest 10/23/12 . chapter 1
IS this quote from the book? or did you rite it?
| Colourful Darkness 6/9/11 . chapter 1
This was such a creative beautifully written poem
| behind.my.bright.blue.eyes 5/24/11 . chapter 1
wow. that was beautiful. amazing. incredible. awesome. wow.
| BillyBuddy1209 3/27/11 . chapter 1
AWWWW! You should write more poems like this for sure! :)
| g-hope-love-life 3/12/11 . chapter 1
i know im late but this is amazing
| larkgrace 3/2/11 . chapter 1
Awww, I love it! This poem really touched me.
| undeadheart 12/15/10 . chapter 1
Oh my, this is awesome.
You got me crying with that poem and that's really something remarkable.
Keep writing you are talented. :)
| ConcreteAngelRoxHerHalo 12/8/10 . chapter 1
this is really good!
| midnightandcounting 11/26/10 . chapter 1
It's beautiful. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing huge. I think you really touched some of the heart of the book and Mia's choice. The beginning is a litte confusing though. I don't really understand what you mean by "I close my eyes and hear a voice, It tells me what to do and say, When it's time to run away." Do you mean that she is passively existing or something else? Maybe you could make that clearer. All in all, I loved it. Nice work!
| mockingjayde 10/19/10 . chapter 1
Hiii! I really liked your poem. I wrote one like it a while ago and posted it, and yours is so much better compared to mine. Mines just something I whipped up on the walk home. Yours is so much more poetic! I really enjoyed it.
The only thing is, the the end to your poem is the same line to the end of mine. I think maybe this is a coincidence, but I just wanted you to be aware. :)
Anyways, it's great. Keep writing! :DD
| Rochy-Rachy 10/19/10 . chapter 1
kool love it