I'm still waiting for the next chapter, this was one of my 1st stories that I read on here and it's still one of my favs. I am looking fwd to what happens. Also I love your writing, have you thought about becoming a writer?

very good AN

yes. i luv reading ur fanfic pls pls update asap. i cant wait 2 read the next chapter. ur an amazing writer

LOVE THIS! please update soon.

I love the story so far... Update soon!

I'm begging you. Please please please please PLEASE update!

OMG PLEASSSEEEE CONTINUE..

i am hooked on this story i love it

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Really good!

please continue!

Very interesting chapter!

Amazing! Please update!

Hun, did you update? Cause it looks like you did, but all I see is the last chapter.

Good chapter, but I kind of wish that Jace would force her to talk. The Jace we all know and love wouldn't really givee up so quickly, I think. Also, Clary seems a little emo to me. I like the plot though, I just think that some of the characters are a little out of character. I feel like Jace would be trying to watch her every second and force her to talk to him, and that Alec would do everything from the background, afraid of imposing. Isabelle, would be almost as bad as Jace, but not quite. Jocelyn wouldn't have grounded Clary in that scene, and Simon would have given her her space and waited for her to come around. But then that's just my opinion. I mean I like your story, that was just a little constructive criticism. Until next time, happy writing! ((:

absolutley love clary in this story ! Update soon :D x

Your writing isn't the best, but I still like it. I think I just want to know what happens in the end, it's very original. Please continue 3

Yea, Jace. You should be the last to announce put downs on her, considering it's you're fault in the first place. :( Yeesh! I can't wait for him to feel guilty about that, btw. lol P I've decided I don't like Jocelyn! lol. I have also decided that Jocelyn is retarded, but I think Clary already established that. "It doesn't take a genius to work a hammer, mom." Yea, like... seriously? And poor, poor Simon, he is so worried about her. ( I just wanna squeeze him. And locking her up? Yea guys that's gonna work loads, when she doesn't even want to be there to begin with. Hmmm. Also I have decided that I like Sebastian. P awesome, can't wait till more!