Good one-shot. )

sooooooo cute! well done! i look forward to your other DxS FanFics'!

SOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

awww so cute! w

D: Danny, I never knew he was uch a love addict xD

! XD LOVE IIIITTTTT!

AW! So cute! Great job!

Awww, that was so sweet! I loved it! Great job! :D

LOL, it's Danny Phantom! We live for dark stuff like death and horror, lemons and disturbing scenes. If you can combine all four we're even happier! Death with a squeeze of lemon is a recipe for yumminess in DP. Lemon sorbet with little black gummy bats on top! Mmmm-mmm. :D DP might have been a kid's cartoon originally, but we turn it pretty dark - sometimes really, really dark.

Danny's pretty OOC here. He should be really awkward, especially with his emotions. He's horrible about putting his emotions into words (or even knowing for sure *what* he feels), can be extremely unsure of himself when he's in new territory, and tends to be a little self-conscious. He's only confident in totally the wrong moments, when he's dead wrong and it's about to get him in trouble. He's always kind of a goof and very much a stereotypical guy. He's the walking definition of the *opposite* of suave. If you write him like that, I think your stories will do very well. Other than him being OOC, your writing is good.

wooo this was cute cant wait for your other stuff

Aww that was so sweet ! I loved it ! I can't wait until you make more ! (:

aww so cute! i love it! :)

How cute :)