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ayanami-verloren 4/11/12 . chapter 1
Please continue! Onegai!
Dark little kitty 3/26/12 . chapter 1
This story is really good. please write more. :)
pinkhearter13 2/20/11 . chapter 1
This is really a unique take on the idea of Kevin Regnard and Liam. I really loved how you started it, too... How the Chains had been fixed around the spot where Xerxes and Alice had entered the Cheshire's Dimension.. And the memory of the Cheshire Cat.. Wow, awesome job!

I hope you write more in the future!

pinkhearter13
Unnybbit 9/23/10 . chapter 1
I am intrigued. *A*
Midnight Marquis 9/22/10 . chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Sorry for shouting. But this is very good and it will be a great pity if it's not complete...

Midnight Marquis
Bloodshed Roses 9/5/10 . chapter 1
fffff- I, too, hope you'll continue this story. with the way it ended, it could be continued many different ways; and they'd all work, as long as you think about it enough.

I'd seriously kill to have this story continued! wellnotreally,but. I've always wanted to read a story with Kevin and Break in it at the same time, as well, so I'm glad I took the time to read this fic.

It's really well written, too! I'll definitely need to read more of your BreakLiam stories! C:
Yuko6754 9/4/10 . chapter 1
Well I can say that I certainly loved this and the idea of a Break/Reim/Kevin sounds amazing. The only thing I think that might be wrong is I think you meant 'muddled' instead of 'muddle' near the end?

Other than that, I think this was great. Especially Break's last line! I really hope you DO continue this!

Scooter
KyoxSakiFan 9/4/10 . chapter 1
... *0* - foams at the mouth and dies-

HOLY SHIAT, I NEED MORE. I...KEVIN!

-screams and falls out window accidentally cause she tried to kiss an imaginary Kevin Regnard-

I have been waiting for ANY PLOT THAT INVOLVES KEVIN COMING TO THEIR WORLD. AND NOW I HAVE IT. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. TvT
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